All Comments on 'My Step-sister Pt. 03'

5 Stars. Great 3rd chapter.

Good story. Can't to see what happens in chapter 4. Maybe tyey will have sex and start dating since they are step brother and step sister and not blood related

You really need to check a slang dictionary before you start using words incorrectly. Poontang is NOT an alternative word for female vaginal juices. Specifically, the correct definition is:

"a woman or women regarded solely in terms of potential sexual gratification."

Google it if you don’t believe me. Colloquially, I've heard it used to refer to a vagina, so I would accept that usage also. But it's crude, and vulgar slang that's better suited to character dialog rather than narrative. 3/5

Good story, don't forget to describe the abundance of pussy hair in your future stories like you did in this one. Do not shave your character.