All Comments on 'My Story Pt. 01'

First story, I don't want to discourage but it's far too short. Honestly like it ends mid-thought. I like the voice tho. Keep going... ;)

It's a wonderful scene-setter, well written and arousing. I also really love reading about a relationship like this that's "in that comfy routine."

Very hot but badly written. This is the introduction to a story at best. Develop it a little more and it could be really good.