by saratin
Not sure what this was about. He's not doing well at work. He's not happy. So he decides to have a little sex (which wasn't particularly erotic or sexy) with his wife and .........what? That's it? This feels more like an introduction to a story rather than a complete story.
....aimless.
The best stories have a beginning, a middle and an end.
This one seemed to start somewhere not the beginning and stopped rather abruptly somewhere near what seems to be the middle.
You sir, are officially at risk of bringing down a full dose of the FTDS treatment.
Here, however, he'd have his work cut out for him.