by MidnightWriter
the husband or the girl friend? They both are pathetic.
Everybody in this story deserves each other. All we have here is a fem-dom, who gets off on humiliating her wimp husband. A "stud" boyfriend who is just an male alley cat, who gets off on humiliating his "friend" and cheats on his girl friend. Then we have the wimp girl friend who not only gets off on her cheating boyfriend, she wants to video it so she can probably jill off to the video later.
Basically just a bunch of losers screwing everything and everybody in sight.
George
everybody whose trying to hate on this story is just that. HATERS. nobody made you read the story and if you don't like stories about cuckolds DON'T READ THEM. as simple as that. personally i loved it and was getting myself off as i read.
I am amazed at how the people how leave negative comments always seem to have read the entire story word for word.
If thats a game the husband is playing he better look out the door because the game she plays is called divorce court.
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
I'm sorry, I don't get the "special secret" part. Is it some kind of special secret sauce? Or maybe something in the water?
Near as I can, it's just a story about some d00d humping a slutwife while her limp noodle of a hubby watches and beats off. This is entertainment?
Here's some entertainment for yah: have the fire department show up and douse 'em all with chemical foam then gangbang all four of 'em for a whole week. Now that's entertainment. I reckon after getting twenty two cocks rammed in every hole the women will be plenty satisfied, the limpdick hubby will have jacked off so many times that his balls will have burst and the fire hose up superstud's rear end will have destroyed his prostrate so he'll never be able to come again.
This was a classic voyeur story! Your story was so hot that it made me want to read your other stories. The girlfriend peeking and witnessing the adulterous couple just subjegating the husband to the tenth degree was incredibly erotic. Keep up the good work!
How do you know what a story is about unless you read it? Also, learn to spell, punctuate, and construct a sentence. Learning some grammar would help as well.
If your girlfriend/wife is sleeping with other men, she's risking YOUR life. How stupid can you possibly be? No amount of clever writing changes the fact that if the little woman is having sex with others, you risk her bringing home an STD, Aids or herpes.
Is ANY woman worth your life? The universal answer is no. So stop making it ok to be with a slut. It never is.
hot jerk-off material. hot humiliation. panty in the mouth was very imaginative
Very glad you write after midnight. None of your cuck.garbage should see the light of day.
There's a lot to keep up with in this submission. Nikki is a retired stripper now married to one of the few men on the planet with a 10 inch cock. Drake's occupation is never stated. Ellen is a dominant hotwife and Bill is a cuck sissy. Hopefully, there won't be a quiz on all these aberrant personae.
Since Nikki and Drake have such an ideal marriage, there must be a reason, other than simply cheating, for his announced work travel to involve fucking Ellen and humiliating Bill. Almost certainly Drake's special secret is his career as a professional bull gigolo. It is TBD how that would impact the cuckquean issue.
With dad a male whore and mom a stripper turned slut wife, Drake and Nikki's children will no doubt rule an adult entertainment empire. Lucky, lucky...
Excellent for the most part. The submissiveness of the husband is the highlight . More verbal and behavioral signs of his obedience would have been more arousing. Keep working at it!
Pulled out all the stops on this one….E should become an escort and get paid while she can, soon she’ll be like a golf ball washer for footballs. DD