by RandomAuthor
Awesome chapter!!! This is getting pretty hot now. She's almost naked and sucked her big bro's cock and taken his seed in her mouth. The beauty of the slow burn is so apparent here. Don't let it die out. I know her first fuck is coming soon!
Keep the chapters coming, RA! Great build up. Ready to see him move into a more dominant role. She's about ready for that. Love the series.
I can't wait to see how this progresses. I am so ready for more, so bring it!
It sure is fun to read!
Next one please!
Thanks for writing!
Fantastic maybe one of the best stories I have read and now I know why my favorite author BeachBum1959 lists you as one of his favorite authors.
I just read the first few lines and what a bunch of crap. Like the would actually be talking like that.
I have posted a few stories on here and I can tell you a developing a deep and energized story. Dont let a negative comment get you down when you are doing so well.
-BDCC
Way too much diddling around for my taste. His sister should be naked by now, not sure why leaving the panties on is such a big deal. If she wants to be dominated, it seems like standing there with nothing on would be the pinnacle of humiliation and dominance. This is just sister/brother sex with a blindfold.