All Comments on 'My Submissive Side'

There seems to be an ongoing issue with grammar which made me wonder if English is your first language? Kudos to you if that is the case. I’d recommend that you ask for help with editing.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

What Tess said: Mostly to do with the verb tenses, and active/passive mode which is as difficult. For example in present tense - I spank/they spank, he spanks/she spanks. In present passive or indirect tense he/she is spanking, or I/they are spanking. In past tense he/she/I/they spanked

Otherwise quite good