All Comments on 'My Sweet Sandy Ch. 02'

by Eosphorus

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Stop using the word Baby , it is a stupid word as no one uses it in sex. Leave it out and I will read the whole story, keep it in and I bypass the whole thing, just so I can leave a comment.

ccs29745ccs29745about 2 years ago

Doing awesome with series. Love the detail and how it could actually happen and not be a story the you think isn't possible to really happen. Keep up great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Readers who are enjoying this story might want to find “Trailing Along” by KenNicottii, elsewhere on Literotica.

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

*****Very enjoyable series I hope there are more chapters. If not thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You need more than 5 stars for these first 2 chapters, because your talented writing brought me back to my youth in so many ways. I think it takes place in New Jersey, Check! The younger man, older woman. Check! Big bust, bare legs in dresses, and thinking about what is up under there. Me 15,she 20, next me 19, she 29, next me 20, she 38, and next me 22, she late 40"s. Bravo to you, thanks for the memories! I cannot way for the next chapters, please. JEF

mitchawamitchawaabout 2 years ago

A great second chapter, and well written. The sex scenes are excellent, but the story lacks conflict and tension. Ther are a multitude of ways for the story to continue but add some characters and problems and issues. to Increase the tension. I'll keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story, very sexy and romantic. On to chapter 3! (Very happy to see another)

ThatVegasVixenThatVegasVixenalmost 2 years ago

So good! Now I feel like I'm in a daze. Wish it was my life lol sigh. Added to my favorites. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I was expecting a little more sex education.

yarinc7777yarinc7777about 1 month ago

Sexy times fun read , more please

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I've been writing erotica since the summer of 2012. I'm a published novelist and find writing erotica to be a cathartic outlet. I seek to craft erotic fiction which is smart, character-driven, and, although mostly fantasy, is sometimes based on real memories and experiences. ...

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