All Comments on 'My Tail'

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noodlyarmsnoodlyarms9 months ago

Excellent story. Would love to see a follow up.

Radical5Radical59 months ago

Nice story really enjoyed it. Hopefully their adventures will continue?? One small critique/suggestion.... as I once heard an Asian woman correct somebody who called her oriental, "Rugs are oriental, people are Asian!" Also, I don't find it necessary to continue throughout the story to describe Aikido by her ethnicity. Thanks again though for the wo Derulo story. You really captured the innocence of the characters.

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75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...