All Comments on 'My Time in Whiterun Ch. 01'

Really? A Skyrim story?

Not bad at all. Give us some more of this story.

I expected this to be a bad one but turned out that setting it in Skyrim made it actually more relatable to me. I love the game :P While there were still a few flaws with writing I liked the story and it would be interesting to see where it goes.

More, please.

I used to bang my mom like you, then I took an arrow to the knee....

Up the storm cloakslol

Little more than an introduction.

This was a one-sided story which was actually more of a possible introduction into a real story. If you want to see how well this author can write, read "The Lake House".