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All Comments on 'My Time in Whiterun Ch. 01'

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Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

This was a one-sided story which was actually more of a possible introduction into a real story. If you want to see how well this author can write, read "The Lake House".

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Little more than an introduction.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
i hope this story runs i like the idea. up the stormcloaks

Up the storm cloakslol

blackirishladblackirishladabout 11 years ago

I used to bang my mom like you, then I took an arrow to the knee....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Surprisingly good

I expected this to be a bad one but turned out that setting it in Skyrim made it actually more relatable to me. I love the game :P While there were still a few flaws with writing I liked the story and it would be interesting to see where it goes.

More, please.

hardheadd1hardheadd1about 11 years ago

Not bad at all. Give us some more of this story.

C2J2C2J2about 11 years ago
eh

Really? A Skyrim story?

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