All Comments on 'My Toy Nancy Ch. 01'

you are one sick person, you hate them both and you let the hate

destroy you. you lost yourself in your revenge.

First thanks for your feedback.

The core of the story involves betrayal - which in terms of a marriage is a brutal situation from the viewpoint of the individual who's been deceived.

That said, you probably won't like part 2; and as for part 3 - oh my goodness.

There is always that possibility of redemption however...

You are right, hate is a strong word. I don't know where this is going, but so far, so good. I enjoyed and look forward to additions. Good luck.

Hope this guy gets mind fucked

Where I could have happily ignored it?

Good question really. I thought that where I was heading with the story was a bit too rough for that group, and where I wanted to head towards with the story made more sense here. I didn't think the story arc I had planned was really well suited for that group in terms of overall content.

Sorry if you felt the first chapter to the story wasn't to your liking; you may find some of the other chapters better though...

I've never read anything like this. It doesn't fall into my normal interests but it is so different that I am really enjoying reading it aand cant wait to see where it goes. Thank you for posting it here.