All Comments on 'My Trip to the Doctor Ch. 01'

I look forward to chapter 2

Definitely has my interest! Unusual for this category yet has potential to be really sweet and entertaining too. Please do post next instalments soon!

It's almost cartoon like in its treatment of the story, and yes, you're right, I've read it or something very similar before. It's still good though, but I do know exactly where this story is going!

I want o see mom get him first!!

it should have involved sex

This is definitely has the makings of a incredibly hot series! Definitely different in a good way :-) I can't wait see where the story leads as each character develops.

good story... plenty of potential.... make it a tad bit more realistic ..e.g..in the body proportions..... would make it an even better story

Cummies?! Pee-pee?! That's sexy talk?! I had to stop reading right then. **

Very hot. Lots of potential. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Need more ASAP!!!! Lead us readers up to the most erotic part and stop this not fair. Almost like making love and the pussy disappears. I think the readers are owed that the writer to follow up with more to read

Please, please rush for the next chapter(s) can't wait what is happening to the mommy and her beloved son....

ANY THING BUT INCEST...HOG WASH

TOO BAD THE RATING SYSTEM ONLY STARTS AT

ONE...I WOULD HAVE GIVEN IT A BIG FAT ZERO

Please hurry with the next chapters, so good.

I agree with the others, hurry up with the next chapter : )

Did you even have someone read through it for you? Or you yourself feed it aloud? The most glaring and repeated problem is the multiple shifts in voice/POV. Is the writer Harry, or someone not in the story?

Found the story silly at best and a waste of time.

so they were in the office for how long before the nurse took off her coat and he realized she had "G" tits? LMAO

and then the mom had FF tits? your story your fantasy, but most of the readers here, while they won't say it, will find that udderly (ha a pun) ridiculous

I gave it the absolute lowest rating possible, and added your name to my 'do not read because of stupid shit' list

apparently you can't satisfy all the readers all the time

yes, there are some glaring spelling / grammar goofs that could use some tweaking/editing, but the most vociferous haters of any contribution should try writing- - or even better volunteer as editors- before critiquing

Let's await the next chapter or so before pronouncing a decision - 'cause I do wonder about Dr Travis' theory , and the prescribed "treatments" - could be a problem that doesn't really need a "cure", just a long line of enthusiastic therapists?

Don't stop. Decent read and find a spell checker. Otherwise you have a good flow and the storyline is great.

a first-time contributor, who's 18 to 22 years old, the kind of writer we need many more of on Lit. He's got a terrific list of Favorites, most of which concern sweet motherfucking. (He's also got multiple dogs as pets, a plus in my book.) So rational readers will cut Charlie plenty of slack. His story certainly has promise. When mom complains that she hasn't been laid in years, young Harry chimes in. "I could help you with that mom." Said Harry his eyes dancing with mirth." Sure you could, you horny brazen boy. Mom can also help out her son. The kid's balls are constantly overflowing, and his mother has the perfect receptacle for all of his semen. It's right there, between her thighs. The warm wet hairy hole the boy came out of. But beware the storm clouds on the horizon. Sarah's a predator and she's on the prowl. Harry's a natural-born motherfucker (as are lots of boys, maybe deep down every last one of them), and the place for his hard young cock and the endless stream of creamy semen from his hot young balls is up the same cunt he was born from.

Great concept, amazingly descriptive and a fast plot. Love the description of him being exhausted and then forced to orgasm one last time. Good work!

I can understand this highly virile young boy whose body keeps producing sperms at a phenomenal rate. But he knows how to masturbate. He can masturbate every time he is hard. Make him masturbate. He can masturbate all day and night. Where is the need of a device to make him cum?

Sarah used to be on Kink, maybe she did some videos for Men In Pain and or Divine Bitches. Can you imagine how much sperm Harry could shoot if she spanks him, either by herself or with his mother? Not only do many boys want to fuck their mother, but just as many want her to spank them nice and hard until their ass is all nice and red, while talking to them sweetly, urging them to be a good boy and come for Mommy. Monica is the kind of mother who would definitely do that for her son.

Great start, but please remember that right from the ancient times, mother son relationship is all about the son getting her pregnant, thus replacing his dad and claiming his mother's womb as his own.

This is the kind of story that I enjoy... women milking cock! Great start with Chapter 1!

Keep up the great work!

Right up my alley. More please.

Awesome story :) suggestion: perhaps see how many times Harry can cum in a row or in a day? Basically just see how many orgasms the boy can handle ;)

The previous commenter is right. The Mother/Son attraction IS all about the son desireing to supplant the father at his mother's side. This is why almost all boys fantasize about their moms and why so many boys get to their teens and suddenly don't get along with Dad too well. She is his fantasy woman because she is the most important woman in his life. She always has been. She was there when he was born. She took him to her breast for his first nourishment and his first day of kindergarten. She cheered for only him when he played sports and supported the band and went to all of his concerts just for him, whether she liked Marching Music or Football or not. Of course she is his perfect woman. Though most Mothers don't admit it, Harry is Monica's perfect partner. She conceived him, grew him in her body, nourished him at her breast, taught him to be the kind of man that she wanted him to be. He grew up to be the man she personally designed, created, and programmed him to become. We need to know what 'study' Doctor Travis has in mind, and we need to see Harry and Monica's romance and sexual awakening blossom. I think another chapter would only be courteous to your readers. You've left them hanging and that is a very rude thing for a writer to do.

As you said in your initial description, this story is similar to several others on this site. I've read all of them I've found, but frankly... I like this one best so far. Keep it up! Also, I'd like to note that personally, I hope this story leaves out the father and any pregnancy.

we all waiting to the chapter 2!

I hope to see the son fill his mother soon.

still waiting for chapter 02...

chapter 2 please!!! great story

Post the second part it's hot

Will he fuck his mom and sarah

Bella locke doesnt have big tits nor is she redhead. Kind of ruins the story you say she looks one way (sarah), but she doesnt look like that...

The reason I'm not giving you a 5 stars, is because of technical issues. Most of the story is told in the 3rd person, but on some occasion you shift to the first person.

The other reason, the boob sizes seemed so unrealistic.

Otherwise, charming, I loved it!! It was clever, interesting and a good read. I'm reading chapter 2, for sure.

Josie : )

Wonderful story

It kinda reminds me of a similar story on this same platform whoose title I can't remember but has the same story line only that the mom actually fucked him

Nice story all in all

A very good job

P. S

If you know the title of the story I described earlier please help:-):-)

Love the dialog while they are comforting and encouraging him through his 3 huge orgasms. Tender and gentle, but also so dirty and sexy. Love it. I love the entire scene, like he is giving birth, but its orgasms and ropes of sperm instead of a baby, and their there to help and cheer-lead him through his pleasure-agony. Wonderful! Please write more like this. And check out my stores for similar stuff.

This story is so hot!!! Can't wait for more!!!

So, you've been fantasizing about Yvonne Strahovski since you were a teenager. Nothing has changed. What a pathetic little child you are. SMH

Love the story. I think it is very good. AAAAAA++++++

This is a masterpiece. One of the best things I’ve read in my life.