All Comments on 'My Twin Loves Ch. 04'

Perfection

The relationships grow and sex escalates.

You also avoided my pet peeve of writing a "threesome" scene when really its just the girls taking turns.

I love how it starts with hip touching, then escalates to breasts, to kissing, to the back door, to how you ended it.

My only suggestion would be the legs. The twins have sexy pairs of legs. Write about how one wraps her legs around the other, how they grind on each others thighs, how they ghost their fingers along each others legs, etc.

Keep up the good work.

Zah

OK we need Chapter 5.