All Comments on 'My Twin'

by CoenaElixa

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laurieg_tvlaurieg_tv11 months ago

That was a very cute story. Thank you.

KatiwantsKatiwants11 months ago

So very beautiful!! I so wish that was me!!!

DianeRedfernDianeRedfern11 months ago

Great story - I hope you write a follow-up. xoxo, Di

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle11 months ago

Great story. Wish I had the courage to transition

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Lovely story! I'll read your other works too now

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Even though it was short and fast, the feeling and telling made it feel as if it took place over some time (yes I know...there are plenty "nothing happened for some time") but some stories manage to just crush into the sex part even though they use those descriptions.

I love it, wonderful writing and storytelling!!

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A writer of contemporary short stories, but I like writing erotic stories too. My interest is in the transitional period, rather than in continued sexual adventures. Those first steps are the most exciting to me. Extended, I find they can become little more than a series of se...