by S3lwyncd0g
Lots of characters to keep track of, maybe a roster at the beginning would have been helpful. But the more the merrier as they say. A great ride, please write more. 5 stars and fave story.
All my best; max052
WOULD LOVE TO READ A SECOND CHAPTER
WITH SOME OF THE WOMAN WANTING TO HAVE A BABY
All of the sex scenes are really hot, but the non sex things could use a little more development. Slow it down a little bit, and build up the moments. Also the coworker could’ve been left out, and saved for a different story all together.
That was a good story but a little to quick to start. I thought Ritchie was a bit shy when you intros him in the beginning and then bam he took charge. I still really like it.
And you damn well better continue to write more of your family sexcapades. This one was Absofrigginlutely incredible.
I liked this very much. Maybe also fuck the coworkers. Birth control is a no no, a put off. Think about giving them all babies. Cant wait for next part.