by addieQ
addieQ does it again, capturing the gay abandon so perfectly. It'll be a sad day when you stop contributing your magic tales to this site
after reading the whole of the story i was rather disappointed with the ending. i think it ended a bit to suddenly. also i think that the story may have dragged on a bit and should have been made to feel more intense. i think that the bit at the beginning about them spending a magical week naked in a tent by a lake may have perhaps been a better story line to go with. however i tell you this so you have an honest opinion and do not mean to offend in any way, overall though very good story and a real turn on.