All Comments on 'My Two Girlfriends: How We Met'

My Two Girlfriends, Sasha, Kathy, and Nikki. Missed some typos too.

Didn't seem very believable either. Unbelievable can be okay if the story is strong. This one wasn't. The fantasy is good. The story needs work.

No writing errors and typos :)

Felt like it ended too soon - you mention possible trouble with parents, then end the story - WTF?

Who is Nikki?

...'Nikki' is a character for another of my stories. I edited this story and it's up now.

Omg the lucky fucker. Two absolutely beautiful sex crazed cunts to play with, a dream come true. What would I not give for a situation like this, I absolutely adore cunt, eating it and dicking it, eating one while fucking the other, then change over, watching the girls do each other and all three of us sex each other up till we pass out from the insane levels of sexual pleasure we generate. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

A virgin, fucking two girls at once for an hour --

and still has not come???

Too much.

That's where I quit reading.

Paul in Oklahoma

Healthy poly relationships are all about letting connections develop naturally in an environment that's safe for all parties involved. Good job and keep writing!

This was a great story that ended too soon. It could have stretched out to 3-5 chapters

Lovely story.

I see there are other chapters

5/5