All Comments on 'My Two Husbands'

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BarnengBarnengover 5 years ago
Nice

good story. a little confusion when derrick was referred to a byron

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1over 5 years agoAuthor
Sorry everyone

I messed up on the names(I just reread it) “Derrick” “Derek”, and “byron” are all the same person. I vow to do better in the future 🙂.

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1over 5 years agoAuthor
I realized it too late

I had started this one, stopped working on it. Came back to it, and for some strange reason, I started calling him Byron. I’ll be more careful going forward.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Who's Byron?

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1about 4 years agoAuthor
it Was a screwup

Derek and Byron are the same guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hot

I hope you do another chapter of this story or something similar with the two husbands.

Lucky girl getting double the dick

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
My husbands brother

My husbands brother moved in with us when he got divorced and my husband suggested that I help him out sexually as it was at least six months since he had sex. This has evolved into me living with two husband, both of them very sexy and very good lovers. I love my life and suggest all women try it!

BigRichard2910BigRichard2910over 2 years ago

Excellent story, well-written (even though rape fantasy isn't my thing - but all's well that ends well i guess)... but is husband's name Derek or Byron?

BigRichard2910BigRichard2910over 2 years ago

Ooops my bad I should have read the previous comments...

Never mind!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You're a damn good writer! Loved it from beginning to end. Thanks for writing. I'm going to read all toy other stories! 5-Stars!

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1over 1 year agoAuthor

Author’s note: I edited the story to take the confusing references to Byron out and made it to where the story flows better. Please give it a second reading and see what you think. 🙂

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Mixed babies are beautiful. Though I was hoping that it would be just the three of them and Jake would place a wedding ring on her hand and she would have her chocolate and vanilla husbands.

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