All Comments on 'My Unspoken Consent Ch. 02'

Jake gets what he wants and hubby gets fucked over.

Wow. What great marriage.

You published this last year. This is the second half of chapter one.

Crap a 0 for lack of effort

Still a cucky 1* mess

can i give a c minus for this pail of slops

Leave for good in the morning... I hope Jake is as good as you tbink he is because he is all your gona have.... I'll find a woman who loves me and not him.

not even on a holiday can loving wives have a decent story posted. ONE STAR

Hope all you wimpy liberal cucks enjoyed this POS. This author is removed from my list permanently. Scumbucket

Actually the head of a penis is shaped to pull a competitirs sperm back out, then deposit your own. Watch a sexuality documentry once in a while.

Spoken, acknowledged or not, "I want you to watch me getting pregnant by my lover of the moment", goes straight to the thought of every man who shares his wife with another and every wife who gives he body and being to a lover not her husband." Good story Dragon and handled well.

Arousing and credible,

when are you authors going to write something worthwhile . This is trash only and belongs in the garbage can. ONE STAR

aren't you ashamed of posting this crap?

Pretty weak effort...used the same storyline and words as chapter 1

"Next time, when you watch us fuck. I want you to watch his cock fucking my cunt... I want you to watch him cum deep in my fertile pussy." She spoke softer now. "I want you to watch Jake get me pregnant." She chewed her lip, rubbing her pussy against me. Next time just put it in I/R where it belongs.

I loved this story. The raw sensuality. The need she felt. The husband waking to find her wanting more. So damn hot. Thank you for this. It was very erotic. It's a shame that asshole keep posting all the bullshit comments. It's just one idiot, so please ignore him.

Try fetish.

1*

I don't see much difference

There's a glaring plot hole in the story: it's left completely unexplained why anyone would want anything to do with a worthless cunt like this. It's like you suddenly had your character take a dump on her restaurant table, while everyone nonchalantly dines on around her. If you present your characters as humans, you kind of have to give them act like humans.

This author is a one trick pony. All his stories are exactly the same. Smacks.of the work of old Gpup.

Load of shite

....about a pathetic man.

Nice to see you back Dragon!

Please ignore the haters and keep up the good work!

Ok writing and pacing except for duplication. A waste of my time re-reading.

Not my favorite plot. I will never understand or identify with this type of husband so I cannot judge his character development.

a self-centered, manipulative wife, a milquetoast husband and an opportunistic, emotionally bereft friend.

However you look at it, there's nothing erotic about this combination. Observing people while they are using others and being used is not much different than watching a Nat Geo documentary about predators and prey. Yawn...

This story was hot as hell. I think my fingers have become waterlogged from stroking my pussy to it over and over again. I so want what this couple have.