by One Wounded Dragon
That in 2018 you have complete assholes who can’t get over the fact that black people and white people have sex together. They show their own bigotry by screaming “racist” if any author dares to have interracial relations in a story. It’s funny how clueless they are as by their own actions they are showing all of us that they are the true racists.
Thank you author for such a how and arousing story. Please continue with this and do us all a favor and please delete the hate filled troll comments.
Got to say, that the writing is o.. It's the story line that's utterly trash.Is the problem (you as the author), that you write this type of story, Because that's all you can think about or are you some one who gets thrilled from receiving nasty comments from the readers. Dude, you need to go see a shrink!!!
"Please, don't ever reject me." I think we have reached a new low in grovelling husbands.
You're the one that's pathetic. Categories were established for a reason. If I want to read about interracial relationships I'd go to that category. Get it ass wipe?
Jake has to be black, so that her baby will obviously not be her husband’s.
Both fucked her, but you know that the odds are that the author will have the baby be biracial
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What to say? If you're writing for your enjoyment, I think you have a winner. If, however, you'd like for others to enjoy your work, you missed the mark. While the writing isn't bad, the story line is sure to draw low scores.
At first the dialogue during sex threw me out of the story, but then if somebody really acted like your characters, I suppose they might speak like that too.
One final question--hows many men do you know who would be okay with a drone hanging around their wife while they supported him, or who'd be willing to raise another man's child while the other fellow sat on his ass and continued to knock his wife up?
Not many, I'd bet, so why do you write that crap in your story?
she sounds just like my wife only mine can not get preg
but she luvs black cock and cum and for me to watch her
and i luv it also
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Maybe try some illustrations or real simulated photos next time.
What sick motherfucker would want a black sicko to impregnate his wife or girlfriend. What's with black on white women shit that excites you stupid bastards?
Some.one.needs to give this idiot Dunkirk a baby bump. What a moron. Agree with CD's assessment of this story, this author is an ir troll.
Ignoring the IR aspects.
This is obviously a voyeur-exhib.
The witness is the hubby.
You take him out of the room. Make all witness accounts auditory. Theoretical.
Dumb.
Very stupid but this technique is all this writer is capable of.
and...not wife sharing...I'm just fine with wife sharing but moving her lover in.. lover fucking her more than hubby... and wanting lover to impregnate her instead of her own husband...that is a bitch slut whore...
100 stars to the writer! Reminds me of how I did my senior high school head cheerleader Terri yrs ago. Early on I asked her while we were having sex if she would fuck my Black Friends. She wanted to try it and with giant boobs and beautiful features she was a hit with all my black buds. I kept trying to get her knocked up by one of them so she could leave school and we could get married. But just didn't work out. But we never used birth control and my black roomate pounded her pussy almost overnight. Ah the good old days!!
I masturbated and shot a huge load, but kinda thought it was wrong that Jake fucked her more than hubby and she wanted Jake to impregnate her, rather than hubby…
I enjoyed seeing my wife fucked by several men and enjoyed fucking her with their cum still in her… but she couldn’t get pregnant… She always fucked me after being fucked by her lovers, and I loved her telling me that I couldn’t reach where their huge cocks did inside her pussy…
Another worthless, very badly written, story by a prancing little Nancy who desires to be some dudes wife some day.
When you closet queens stop writing like you are mentally ill, maybe we'll stop calling you that.
Without looking did our resident racist right wing fool 26th comment on the black part?
My wife wouldn't have sex with my black friend even with a condom because she didn't want to take the chance of making a baby. After her hysterectomy he got all the sex he wanted.
Great! The woman pussy is universal. It can take all sizes and colors of cocks and doesn't care. If a woman wasn't suppose to fuck other races their cocks wouldn't fit or their sperm wouldn't make babies.
Still an outstanding story. If it wasn't for the racists and the bigots this story would have a very high rating. LOL but with all the asshole High School dropouts on here making moron comments that won't happen. I have to really admire this author, the way that he can describe such an erotic relationship with their threesome all living and fucking together. This is some very erotic writing, I only wish that I could do it as well someday. LOL, I don't think I will ever be able to. But I will keep trying. Great Job Thanks for all the effort, and I know that it takes a lot of effort. Thanks, Buster2U