All Comments on 'My Unwanted Transition Ch. 13'

Who's Nicole that show up suddenly at the end?

Huh. I must have had the name Nicole on my mind while I was typing. I submitted an edit. Thanks for point it out!

The outcome is never good once a woman which in this case would be 2 involved that possessiveness becomes huge issue. Guy can have sex and it not be emotionally attached just for feeling good but not women so is end goal here to devastate all you’ve created just wondering cause interesting read just hate for heartbreak

Oh Damn !

This freakin story has turned my brain and all it hold to mush.

My emotions have been tossed like a dinner salad.

I have felt jealousy due to Jenny's strange transition.

I could go on and on. But it would likely become boring to any reader.

So !

To the author I say, There are a lot of word as well as phrase changes I would make in this story.

A good editor as well as a slow proofreader would likely make far more changes than I would suggest.

Or maybe far less !