All Comments on 'My VideoChat Error Ch 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good story, where's the rest

Massively enjoying these stories would like it to hurry up a bit though! Is Shauna ever going to get locked in chastity, so he can be really feminised

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loveing this series

can't wait to hear what comes next...the ominous big plans for her future sounds dark....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I’m panting

This so hot. It’s like reading my dreams. I’ve been out in public once and know exactly the feelings of trepidation that Shauna describes. I never got as far as the bar but I think about it and what it might be like. Reading this story is like filling in the blanks. The changes Shauna is going through, the experiences she is having are so totally erotic. I’m in love with this series, and especially this chapter.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dark Lusty Thoughts

Like the thoughts that are going through Shuna's head. She needs to get laid to protect Denise but seems to be losing that train of thought for the time being in the bar. Jerome is a white guy? Wow, that is a first for me as most stories often portray Jerome as a black guy. After finding out what is in store for Denise if he does not bring back anyone, he needs to go all out. Not sure if Naughty will renege on his offer either way but will probably have Denise raped again anyway. I would not be surprised if Roger and his boys are not already up at Denise's room raping her now.

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