All Comments on 'My Wife and a Friend'

Forget these stupid comments from some really dumb readers. They should stay in the Gay section! Keep up the good work. He now has a slut wife. It is all downhill now .

he should have sucked Kevin's cock. He sure wanted it bad enough

If you dont like this kind of stories then go read another category,Nice story keep going

Ignore the idiots. Why would they read a story in this category anyway? Comments should be left to those who can make a LEGITIMATE arguement. FUCK. There were points about your writing that need some editing, such as removing the accidental ">" marks and a few gramatical errors, however the storyline was fairly good. Perhaps with a good editor, this could be a great story! Don't let the idiots get you down!

Ignore the low life's that read these stories, then after jacking off to them feel guilty and have a need to knock them. It was very good. Just one criticism: Use dialogue. Todays readers are used to getting the details through exposition (action and dialogue) as opposed to narration. Exposition is much more immediate. Try reading 'A Wife-Sharing Tryst' on this site for an example. Good luck!

time ever I'm jerking off right in front of my computer. If my wife catches me, I'm in deep shit. Hey I'm only a man. I couldn't help myself. Nice story

I liked the realist touches that you added, it wasn't a porno it was real life. godd job, hot fantasy.

And no cash from his friend - thats when a wife ho isn't worth it so why not pimp her out - just get the cash [.50 cents] up front.<P>

You do this self cuckolding yourself eh. No wonder she looooves you. He likes you too as long as there is your ho available but neither of the 3 of you respect you as a man. Don't pay any attention to their laughing about you.<P>

You need a new ho - 1 that respects you.

Liked your storey and the way you lead up to it. Anonymous knockers don't have the guts to put their name to their comments so they're not worth reading. My wife and I have been in a number of MFM, MFMF and FMF situations and I have written about them. Mostly they were all good, the couple of bad ones I didn't write about. Keep writing but use more speech, we like to know what each character is thinking. Good luck.

Well told! You took it nice and slow so that it was believeable. Good job!

Perfect until the story switches to present tense. It's a bit jarring just as you get to the "climax". There's nothing wrong with editing and resubmitting, even this long after the first submission. Great idea. Just stay consistent and slow it down at the end.

Our arrangement is a little different. If my wife is out and about and runs into a friend of hers she invites them over mentioning that I don't usually wear clothes around the house and if that would be a problem she would call me so that I would be dressed. Most of the time they say don't bother but my wife secretly calls me and lets me know and the antcipation gives me an instant hard on. When they arrive I'm usually naked on the computer watching porn and after introductions my wife says that if I'm going to be naked they might as well also. Many are willing and if they do it tells me they are open to anyting else. Our favorite thing to do is for me to give them massages which leads to finger fucking and face fucking which my wife loves to participate seeing she is bi ! We have cultivated quite a following.

another semen slurping loser is on the loose. This is not the category for this kind of story. This fits in fetish not in loving wives.

I didn't vote. I started to read, went to the end, and knew...

I need to go take a shower.

I knew you were a cuck after I read your first story.

Thank you for the fun story. It reminded me of one of our first threesome with a young man my wife had seduced while I was in the service. She was a second semester junior in college and earned extra money as a nude model for the life drawing classes. He was one of the students in the class and very shy. She enjoyed teasing him in class and eventually had him give her a ride home one rainy day and took it from there. That weekend we had a threesome with him and introduced him to one of my wife's friends. They became a couple but would stop by on weekends where we would swap partners. Fun was had by all. Again, thank you for a fun story,

Great story, enjoyed the build up. It's a perfect story for loving wives, fuck all the haters. Can't wait to see more of your stories. I gave it a 5 out 5.

Yeah, sorry but hated it. It just did nothing for me at all. It had no heat to it and it felt kind of lackadaisical truth be told. Not the worst story I’ve read here by a long shot but not very good either. Good luck!

A well written good read.