by Sarthak72
Please don’t write anymore.
This was more painful to read than you can imagine.
Please I’m begging you to either pick a different category to write in or just please stop writing. This is why everyone hates Cuckold stories and this one is just another pile of wasted time and effort writing. Very sorry to be so blunt about it but this was like so pathetic it was like a teenager had written it. I can tell you like to write stories which don’t get me wrong is commendable but to write a story that on here are just a waste of time they are like quick to write sort of stories that you want people to know you are still alive kind of stories. You need to go back to the proverbial drawing board and see what is capturing the readers eye so to speak look at the different category’s . You need to look at what you enjoy writing aka fetish or BDSM or nonConsent see how other writers write etc . Don’t get me wrong we like to encourage newbies but it’s when they always write these sorts of stories it gets me down nearly 90% of all newbies write stories like this and nearly all never write stories again because of the poor reviews.
Now stop so no one needs to go read such a decline that is sure to follow.
A stunningly great story! Your talent surpasses JPB. HDK and ohio combined! Don't stop all fuck!
Firstly, put this stuff in FETISH!!!
Secondly, where are all these f*ing cucks coming from?
I loved story. i got so hard by thinking about that mans penis in your wifes pussy. please write more such stories. thank u
Pretty much like the Brits, erotic stories really fucked up the reputation of Indian men.
The way they are portrayed, you would think they are a nation of wittols....
Yet all of those endless stories of happy Indian cucks were written by Pakistanis. Hey, you never know...
Please stop…….I normally don’t give bad reviews cause I understand that writing these stories take time. But this is just awful.
First part was good as well as the second part, too.
But it became awful when she became a town whore.