by TriangleToast
Great start! One of the kind of premises I really like and also well written. Cool thing that you choose a nerd squad as "antagonists". But there is also a thing that didn't make sense. Claire was very horny when they got home, but shortly after its all about the MC and her horniness is never mentioned again. Still a 5* for me, please keep going! I'm looking forward to your next installment!
It is your story, and a fiction, but only in fiction can you have shit like this!
In a real life, nobody is that dumb: "I had a small, close knit circle of friends"...
Do you comprehend the meaning of those words?
I can see they are tooooo hard for you?
Well... Nerds are good friends, and you are insulting every nerd in the country with your story. -1
PS: You could put it in fetish so that all mentally ill cuck lovers would sing phrases to you...
Just for that for that last comment I'm gonna besmirch the good name of nerds in whatever country you're from even harder Anonymous!
A story, based on the involvement of some mentally retarded dickhead, isn't much of a story. It's like teasing and tormenting a helpless animal.