All Comments on 'My Wife Goes on a Date'

5*. A classic. Please repost “An amicable divorce “. One of my favorites

Have been searching this site for a long time trying to find this story. Read awhile ago and loved it. Thank you for reposting. looking forward

to re-reading all your stories.

It's always a pleasure to give the 5 full stars to a good balanced LW tale, after the countless negative rating given to the totally unrealistic cuck tales invading every day this category. Hilarious the fact that most cuck tales authors are starting to disable the comment section, and even the rating section, so much negative are the readers feedbacks and ratings. So, more tales like this. Keep going.

wow

I liked the writing and the characters I had a small problem with fairy tail aspect of it. Nice work and thanks for sharing your work.

I am so glad to see you are finally reposting your lost stories. You cannot do so fast enough for me! 👍🏻

5 Stars.

I liked that story....5 stars.

Liked it but ending wasn’t complete. Unsatisfying

Gonna write what I think I wrote the first time I read this story:

Nice. Very nice. But it would have been way nicer if that story actually had an ending.

One of my favourite stories of yours . I am so glad you recovered it.

Fantastic story !!! 5 Stars.

I know its a repost loved it the first time. Any chance on a follow up years down the road?

No ending!!! Ugh!!!

I remember this story and I gave it 5 stars after I had to edit it so I could listen to it with Text Aloud with Jennifer's voice. I found out that you still don't edit out the dot dot dots. How many actual novels listed or not listed on NY Time Best Seller list? How many novels used dot dot dots for any pause? Still worth 5 stars, just because it was a good story. Should have given it 3 stars for the editing I had to do.

Thats the ticket, Darla needs some luvin and some hard fuckin, yehaa

I was shocked I saw a hubby in LW finally acting like a normal man. Wanting to date other dudes = insta-divorce, no need to drag for story padding. Then this much welcome realism got a bit of blemish when his mom supported the slut. Every mother I know would want to struggle the slut, preggo or not. And an even bigger blemish when it concluded with the tired trope of immediately finding another love interest. A simple time skip would have fixed that. The fact he once again fell for yet another broken bitch is not unrealistic though. Some dudes never learn and they seem to have a "type". I'm just waiting for the follow up where his new psycho gf fucks him over....

FANTASTIC story!!!! 5 stars!!!

I remembered reading this a year or so ago and still enjoyed it.

Glad you decided to republish this one... All five stars turned golden again just like the original. Hope you continue resurrecting all of them. Let me know if there are any issues going forward. GF

Great story well told

Ah, the classics, back online.

Loved it

I am sorry I couldn’t enjoy this lightweight Femdom agitprop as much as everyone else seems to have done. For me, it was too romance-y and not enough erotic-y.

Femdom agitprop, that's a new one. Insecure motherfuckers could read a bus schedule and find something to get mad about! Fuck off, HighBrow, you need therapy. Still a 5* story

I enjoyed this very much as well. Unlike HighBrow I too read a story to enjoy and think about and maybe become a little smarter for it. This did all but it had the negative of Never giving the wife any sort of a chance. Marriage that young will almost force that need to know, what they missed in life. She was ashamed enough to lie about it wasn’t she? Still a 5 with comments.

I'm hoping there will be a Part 2?

It cries for Part 2?

Usually I hate endings like this. But I got tired of the happy ever after stupid endings so I like this one. Maybe things worked out with Darla or maybe after he got sexually sated he found out she was an unbreakable bitch and hit the road. You can decide for yourself.

Okay, so he calls the sister and then when she answers: she looks directly into his eyes. Come on, man...

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

A sad story about a complete fool

How do you make a lasagna and serve it in an Rv after driving it quite a distance with a suppsed BROKEN ARM.

Good story, Ephesus, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. I too noticed the incident when he was talking to Judy on the phone one minute, and the next minute they were staring into each other’s eyes while she blushed. I got a bit of a laugh out of it. In film I think they call that a “continuity” problem. Oh well, no biggie for me. As I said, a very good story, thanks.

5 stars.

I have read this story before and there was more to it .So is this just the first part or will there be a sequel?

I call bullshit!!

Know a lot of people who openly discuss sex. Most want love and then cuddle.

I listen as not really into discussing my private business. But wife and relatives etc are a lot of medical people and their discussions are usually about sex and things they see. Some are into rough But few.

At this site, good guys seldom come out on top ... but the main character did here ... good deal.

Not sure where this was going. Jodie was irredeemable bitch. Premeditation, emotional affair, ambush with the date / sex (except Michael gave Hina heads up), then all the lies, video evidence that she had great pleasure with Stan the asshole, then desertion, then continues to f$ck Stan both at their hometown and in Florida, uses Judy and her family as a fouk to try to intercede. What was her end game? Even lied about being pregnant to win over his own mother. She knew about his background and his intolerance but pushed it nonetheless. Nothing ahe sid was remotely rational. Then she gets beat up by Stan who cheated on her after rhe moved to Florida. MC doesn't care. Judy was a faithless friend. Thinknshe had regret at the end when the pregnancy was a lie. Just a hot mess. The stuff with Darla was odd. Where was it going? Just stopped with rough sex. In this story every woman wanted rough, nasty sex. Sorry but that rings hollow for most of the population. Some vigor and forecefulness, sure, but intermixed with maximizing pleasure for your lover is more the norm. Not one of the author's finest stories. Capable of more.

I liked this but the ending was a bit abrupt. Maybe another page to finish things up cleanly with a resolution to the marriage was needed.

Awesome keep writing

Okay, Epilogue is her Grandparents actually own his RV Dealership. LOL

Great story EPh. Your stories are among the best available in LW. I have enjoyed them all.

little more on this one how did marrege end up did his romance thrive

Good story! It's a pity Stan didn't hurt the ex wife more, but I guess can't have everything :) 5 stars, and thank you for an enjoyable read.

Fantasies of a not very bright teenage boy.

So where's the rest of the story? Seems unfinished like most of your other submissions.

I'm left wondering how old the main characters are meant to be, on the one hand they seem like very early 20s but on the other hand he comes across as very middle aged.

The thing is, it's very unlikely that Jodel would have made that ultimatum if she really was early to late 20s, such ppl don't have the comfort of a settled life to pull that kind of play, such ppl just cheat and have affairs. It takes someone that believes that the partner has more to lose to even consider taking that risk. They didn't have a house, nor kids, not even substantial wealth in bank and investments ... who in their right mind would be that deluded to believe it would work ... but even worse was his response that made it more than clear that she had no encouragement, ambivalence or even the slightest inclination that it would even be worth trying.

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I've read many similar stories with the same plot and almost all of them fail at providing the real world mental processes that would bring a woman to think such an ultimatum would work. I doubt that in RL we see such failures of thinking, that in almost all cases the woman or man had some concrete idea that it would fly, even if in the execution of such failed. But this like most others just seems a case of the alien slut ray, mental illness etc.

Not saying she wouldn't have wanted to cheat, or that she wouldn't have cheated, just that she wouldn't have asked without knowing there was a more than good chance of a positive outcome. Or at the very least, have some serious reason as to why she'd think he'd go along with it.

"Because he loves me" is not a reason on its own.

/This story might have worked if she was actually pregnant, and she'd known she was pregnant before the date. Then at least her whacky thought processes could be laid at the door of hormonal changes, a realisation that her life was going to profoundly change and a real sense that this was a last chance to fool around before adulthood. That could also have given wiggle room for her delusional belief that he would allow it, because of the baby.

But no, we're given none of that, not are we given a well thought out ending, just a rushed and sloppy job to satisfy the presumed audience.

Women who cheat might want the hot taboo sex of cheating/cucking their husband and sport fucking, but that is a long long way from 'rough' sex of hair pulling, choking and slapping that this author suggests.

Ironically, if we were to believe the author, we could also believe that it really was only for sex ... which for most people without fragile egos would be food for thought, rather than a definite divorce.

This is one of those stories that could lead to another episode, even if only to tie up loose ends.

I am not sure a happy ever after is in the cards or necessary. It seems like they just were horny. On another note this male M/C is the king of stupidity and vacillation. He seemed to be a milk toast that now like Darla, users anger as a defense mechanism,

I'll give it the same 1 star that I give all LW stories where the author writes the wife as some unbelievable idiot that thinks she can just nonchalantly tell her husband that she is going to fuck another guy but it will be like it never happened when she gets back home. Then, of course, she can't understand why the husband is upset afterward. Why anyone would think it's a good decision to write a character/scenario like that just boggles my mind, as it makes it impossible to be a good story after a start like that.

To the anonymous poster who says a wife would never tell her husband she’s going to date another guy, a version of this scenario DID happen to me. My wife had been getting close to a guy in our neighborhood that we both knew and spent time with. Over time, he offered to help with odd jobs out our house…he painted a small half bath near our front door and cut tree branches that were starting to overhang our roof. He is a teacher and ws off during the summers and said he liked to keep busy and be helpful. Anyway, long story short…my wife fell for him and I didn’t see it until she told me she was going to go over to his house and make dinner to thank him for all of his help. She said they were going to watch a tv series they’d both heard was great and for me not to wait up. I stopped it from happening, but she later admitted that she knew they might have sex that night and since we were “drifting apart at times” that I’d have been okay with the sex had it happened. So, I know first hand the deluional state an otherwise sane person can get themselves into when they want to find ways to rationalize and justify doing what they really, really want to do.

I liked the story but still rated this as only a 3. That the wife thought her husband would accept her going out on a date with another man & not in any open relationship seems to be idiotic on the wife, & somewhat unbelievable on the husband. But I did like what he did- packing her shit up & throwing it in the car, among other things.

>> Her sister in law wanting him to take her back as supposedly no sex was involved wasn't exactly told that she went there, despite his objections, to have sex; whether she did or not is beside the question. It's that she did. Same when her father called. She also admitted to knowing the sister & lover's meeting even when she's trying to get hubby to reconcile. By that action, she's as much a bitch as his wife.

>> The mother who not only agreed (initially) with his wife but also met her while she's supposedly away is grounds for termination of any relationship. When mom arrived at his door, she's lucky he didn't slam the door in her face.

>> I'm unsure, not having been a female, but I'm not sure how often women really want to have their hair pulled & totally fucked (NOT made love to) with their asses & whatever else slapped. Then again, what the hell do I know?

>> I thought the sexual relationship with Darla started too fast/ soon. Moreso, & to be worse, there's absolutely nothing written about where their relationship went to. The story was just dropped there. If it wasn't for the writing & overall story telling, I would've downgraded this to a 2.

>> Didn't see or missed it, but from the writing of the anon a few days previously, who reacted to another stating she wouldn't tell her husband she's having a date with another guy, I wonder how she'd hide it, unless bringing the change of clothes to work. But not returning home until very late or the next day? If the husband's not a wimp (which I gather), it's grounds for him to at least get a separation if not full scale divorce.

>> If the story was completed in full (which seems to not be THE thing with too many authors I've read), I might've given this a 4 in spite of what I wrote above. But as written, 3's the best. Bob

I stopped reading after Judy said Jodie was in Ft Lauderdale - a beautiful city the last time I was there by the way. As a pastoral counselor in my much younger days, I never met a spouse who did not confront the one suspected of cheating; especially if they knew about the affair beforehand. Yes, if he had confronted her, she might’ve postponed the affair until a later time, but there’s also the possibility that the confrontation would have been the reality check she needed. Additionally, as she was leaving he could’ve stopped her with the phrase, “I’ve already seen the lawyer and drawn up the divorce papers. If you step out that door, you’ll be served Monday.” I’ve had three clients who did this. It worked for two. The third wife was so stuck in her delusion she ignored the warning and was surprised when she was served.

And finally, not one of my male clients allowed the wife to reach the AP’s car without having words with the AP. And by words, I mean violence often requiring police intervention. I’m from the boomer generation. We did not allow anyone to steal our wives without going down without a fight. Hence the need for pastoral counseling 🙃

As for the anons who find this scenario to be unrealistic, I’ve lost count of the number of delusional women that gave their SO’s ultimatums because they “deserve it” and “you love me enough to let me do this” and “everything will be back to normal tomorrow” I counseled before suffering burnout and leaving the field.

You messed this story up big time. He was warned about his wife on the premices he would break it up and not get screwed in a divorce. Yet you had Him do NOTHING to prevent it, but only have him begging her not to go when she was leaving.So the divorce happened as a result,with the consequence that come along with it for a husband..That was not very well planned out by you and definitely lost credibility to anything further in the story,thus losing my interest..that alone hurt this tale to only.. 2 stars..JZK

I just don't get the non confrontation. As prior commenter and former counselor mentioned, it just does not sound believable. And why wouldn't Jodie just cheat behind his back? Why the ultimatum? Of course he was prepped and yet he did nothing but let her go. Wtf?

Of your stories this is my favorite

horror: A while ago all your stories were gone, I thought to myself, shame I won't be able to read that again

Now its back, great news, I have just read it after the long break

Thanks for reposting

Jason

Nice little story.

Well written and paced. Interesting throughout. Give stars from me. I wish there were more.

JPB

Don't associate with very mentally-damaged individuals, and certainly don't marry them. Jodie got off too easily as far as I'm concerned, but then again they often do. :(

Question: Judy visits him at the RV center. While still there she miraculously calls him, apparently from her home. A bit difficult to accomplish, wouldn't you agree?

One of my favorite tales - thank you sir! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Sorry, this is a mess. The part I had the most trouble with is, knowing how fragile and damaged Darla is, he still jumped straight into bed with her. And I hated the end.

The problem as I see it is that she acts like a complete witch the whole time, then suddenly changes? I don't think so.

Loved it ! 👍

Gave you five stars and wished there was another chapter. Thought you might have him tell Darla about his ex being in the hospital and Darla

insisting to go with him to visit the ex and be all loving on him to make her jealous. Also the reaction of the gate guards to him spending the night as well as the grandparents and parents reaction to her being in a good mood and pleasant to others.

Divorce

Too many people obviously speed read because they skip over the explanations for their bitches (either that or they are simply stupid). If you just enjoy the words and tales WE ALL WILL BE HAPPIER. Thank you 5 stars.

it would not have mattered if jodie fuck him or not goodbye judy had no right to call about jodie being in the hospital it was over .and i hope he doesnt marry darla the haS CHEATING WRITTEN ALL over it but 5 stars any way

Got to agree with the overly long post of the anon 2 months ago. Jodie had no reason to assume he'd accept it, and the MC gave no inclination that he was a love struck sucker.

The post affair breakdown just didn't give the feel of a LW, and Jodies quick move to Ft Lauderdale, the home of springbreak immorality and of course in Florida the land of Sti's and subsequent move in with the AP furthered the impression that Jodie had a longterm plan of moving on.

Worst of all though was the way the MC got off on being a willing cuckold by repeatedly watching the video of his wife and her lover.

The Darla story could have been quite good, was looking good but unfortunately again it was rushed and then just ended.

In a story like this it's quite important to have a years later epilogue where the wife recognises her mistake as we revel in her shitty life.

We all k ow that more often than not cheating wives hook up with their AP and have a better life, that's not what we're here for.

Lol @ the anon 6 days ago that actually thinks that there was a valid and illuminating explanation. Guess some people will believe anything in their attempts at avoiding cognative dissonance. As for insulting people, that's a little dunning kruger.

Another dumb story that you didn't have the good sense to leave deleted. Too much over-writing (the three-paragraph dissertation on unwanted phone calls when it was his wife's office line), the cliches, the wholly unbelieveable "I'm going on a date and are so clueless that I refuse to believe you aren't okay with it even after you tell me" trope, and the subsequent lock-out of the home which the husband always solely owns (even with that, he needs an order of eviction to lock her out.

He had prior warning but waited until she was ready to leave to confront her. He was just looking for an excuse to dump her. I hate this type character and the people who write this crap. Wish we were allowed to give you negative starts.

It has the bones of a good story, but there's no conclusion. It ends at the end of the second act. The third act and the reveal of the final results of everything is missing. As such, this is unsatisfying and really only about half a story. 3*

Good story, but the ending was too sudden. Either an epilog or a second chapter could turn this into a great story.

For me personally, a post in non-erotic about the MC's relationship with the Jacobson's could have been Hall of Fame worthy.

So glad to read a story where a guy has character, balls and backbone. He shouldn't give a flying fuck about ex wife or anyone else in her family. Good for him turning a deaf ear to those evil bitches!

Great story that should be Hall of Fame in any genre.

You would have thought that she would have fucked his brains out the night before to soften him up. Also,did it ever occur to her that he had never had another woman?

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WE, i.e. her and the other guy decided it might be fun?

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"It wasn't easy for her to tell me about her date" - Why not? She had no problem telling her husband. Maybe because she knows it was WRONG?

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"Mrs. Taylor adamantly denies the alleged adultery" - No fault divorce doesn't require adultery.

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Granted, Trey told her no, but Judy at least hoped for a friendship, hiding Jodie's location didn't help.

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"She was not going to sleep with her brother-in-law. Period." - She was so turned on just hearing about the video, watching it will have her ripping her clothes off!

Overall, a good, interesting story. Wife wanted a date with sex to her co-worker, then lied a few times in trying to get him back. Along the way, his mother gave him grief for not accepting her back, the wife's sister lied if only by omission in knowing she's still having sex with the guy but wanting the husband to forgive. That doesn't include her withholding knowledge of where the wife was. BUT! when the wife's hospitalized, the sister expected him to go to her (the wife).

>> Along the way, he meets Darla, who's hell on wheels with a huge attitude. However, nearing the end of the story, they're romantically involved but then the story ends. Did they split up, just became friends? Marry? Story was dropped without an ending, & so I drop my rating to 3 stars. A shame, really, but I always drop the rating for unfinished stories. Bob

5 stars! Excellent story and great reading. Many thanks!

I so appreciate the understanding of modern women. To think that this woman thought that she could just go on a date with another man without any commentary or push back from her husband shows me a complete loss of understanding of what marriage is...and with the advent of OF and other such filth women really expect that men are here on earth only for them to walk on. Thanks for the story and thanks for all the understanding that went along with it.

Feels like this was left unfinished. All that work up with the cheating wife to get to Darla and then poof, it's over? Feels like the ending was cut off from this story.

The punctuation throughout was miserable. Commas misplaced or more often, not even used, leading to run-on sentences. Quite often, semi colons were used in place of commas. Several times, with misplaced words, I had to read a sentence twice to figure out what you're trying to say. Get somebody to proof read your stories. All that tends to lessen the enjoyment.

And like too many other authors, you left the story incomplete. What happened with the divorce? With Darla? Was the relationship caught short or did they eventually marry? What was Jodie's future? Too many questions not answered. If you write a story, complete it! Likewise, stop using so many "even" and "really"; most of the time they're not needed. Call it me trying to help.

But as the story goes with my comments, I only could give this 2 stars. A shame as this should've been 4. gsr

The ending was perfect. He learned a valuable lesson from his ex wife. Sometimes a gal just wants to be fucked hard. His ex didn't want him to learn that lesson, she was happy using him as a meal ticket. She had more than one chance to reconcile and used every chance to be a coward, liar, and abuser. Good riddance.

I have to agree with the gist of this story. If you treat women like queens, they will treat you like a servant. The only time you should put a woman on a pedestal is if you want a better look up her dress. There is a fallacy that passion is always soft and tender. The true passion comes you fully let out what lives within you, and let it run.

Being fucked hard means being desired hard. Being made love to is alright for normal times, but it also means safety and that is boring. The lesson I take from this one is that many of the best people out there are very wounded. The triumph of the author is that we end up liking Darla and wanting her to win out over the demon memories that possess her. Modern women? People after sexual liberation are just more selfish than before. Some take it fully to narcissism like the burned-by-exclusion ex-wife.

Relationships might go easier if women admitted that sometimes they want to be treated like a two dollar whore. There’s absolutely nothing wrong with banging the dust off every once in a while. It’s a much healthier way to vent.

A good story, well conceived, developed and presented, even though there were too many proofreading errors. Some may criticize that the ending didn't tie up loose ends, and gave no information on the future. But to me, the ending was just about perfect. It gave a hint as to a happy future, and that is enough.

Five stars from me.

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JPB NOT BOB