All Comments on 'My Wife Goes on a Date'

A LW Literotica classic for sure. I'm glad this is back up again

It was great a great first time..... like good wine gets better over . Classic indeed.

Glad to hear that you are re-posting your old stories!

5

Loved it the first time and second time it didn't disappoint. My only slight thing is that in this type of story I like to see a fuller confrontation with the wife. In this one maybe meeting her in the hospital and hearing her answer to "was it worth it" still a 5 star story.

Like the other commenters, remembered it, loved it before, and now, well done.

This story is as good as my memory told me it was. 5 stars. However, the ending was abrupt, and not in agreement with my memory.

Needed to be longer. Excellent story. Yay!

The ex-wife has done a complete 180 turn.

Because of a very good fuck, she became a cheater, a liar, manipulator, selfish.....

She didn't read the warning about side effects. 🤣

Always a great story.

Thanks for reposting. I enjoyed rereading this as much as the first time. Darla’s a memorable multidimensional character - she’s the reason I (fondly) recalled having read this before. I hope you locate and repost more of your deleted portfolio. Thanks much.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ outstanding!

I enjoyed this as much as the first time I read it. Even better is the news that you are bringing your stories back. I’ve missed them.

Glad you have reposted. Hope you have luck getting more of your lost material. Great to have you back

I liked this the first time around, glad it's published again.

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I guess 5* last time and another 5* this time make it a perfect 10!

5 Big Blazing Stars for a Great Story and Great Writing. Thank you for the Effort. Buster2U

Despite the apparently happy ending, he was a royal asshole

This one was very enjoyable the first time and the second reading did not disappoint. I hope your old stuff finds its way back to you.

Liked it the first time I read it, and I like it now. D

I really enjoyed this the first time I read this and I think it's about time for a follow up.

It took awhile but when he had to fly back and bring the RV to Houston my memory kicked in. I enjoyed it then and I enjoyed it now. I am glad you had the opportunity to repost it.

And they lived happily (with some black and blue marks) ever after. 5 stars. Good story, humor, kept a frown then smile on my face. Thanks.

Thanks for the repost. First wife was a real piece of work.

Like others, I enjoyed it the first time and rereading it was again, fun. I would love a 750 word story apology from the ex-wife.

Still good. A classic. Glad you found it.

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I remember reading the original twice before. Still a favorite.

Loved it first time reading. Still in love with it. Mega kudos.

WS

looks at page, looks at inside the back of book, looks at back cover... is that how it ends?

Like the story and romance a lot but the author left lots of dangling threads; ex-wife (hospital stay, plans, reaction to Darla and future), other man (namely his skills as a lover?), ex-wife's sister (watching the video, romantic interest, reaction to Darla) and Darla (immediate future, long-term, cured attitude?)

Very good story… would like an epilogue. Or, another chapter… thank-you

Glad you saved it. This was my second reading.

I think I've read this one before - I'm sure I gave it 5 stars then, too!

I enjoyed it, but it just feels unfinished. Also I understand the character is an RV salesman, but as a reader I'm not that interested in RV specifications.

Thanks for restoring this classic! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I had been looking for this for months, so glad it has been put back up.

Glad to see you are re-posting some of your older stories. I always like them.

Welcome back Darla and Trey. Great story.

TC Ireland

I honestly couldn’t get through the first page.

What person doesn’t have their phone on a passcode and what person would call up a man he doesn’t know and spill the beans?

Maybe hubby is a violent sociopath who will kill everyone. Maybe he’s an abusive POS and Jodie is leaving him. The caller has no idea who the husband is and ZERO motivation to call him.

If you can’t even get that right, I can’t see you getting anything else right.

It was a good story. I just didn't like the ending where he supposedly ended up with the crazy woman after divorcing another crazy woman. Oh. As of 11/7/23 your profile doesn't exist on Literotica. Just thought you might want to know.

Is this a repost, redux or just copying someones work?

How is ur Mc seeing ppl over the phone? Is he facetiming with these ppl? He is on the phone looking into her eyes rofl. Needs an edit

Very good The first one of yours I have read Hope to read a lot more (jaybee186)

ch. 02?

Great reread

Why the fuck would he hook up with Darla? This guy is an idiot.

I remember this one and liked it then.

The revamped version is good too.

Long winded story

This is the first time I have read this story and I’m very glad I did. Great story, very well written in all respects. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved the first posting - totally enjoyable read. Happy you reposted. 👌

Cuteness ) 5*

Welcome back. 7 stars, the Bear missed this for a long time. It just needs a second part. Please, sir, can we have some more?? (See, I can quote Dickens, too.)

The BEAR

I agree with Ic69hunter, Jodie is lucky to be shed of this completely useless self centered asshole.

I loved your story but you lost me when he the MC was talking to his wife's sister about rough sex.

He went from talking to her on the phone to directly in her eyes. Then he hung up the phone?

Check it out bottom of page 2.

I don't understand why sad, bitter men post their revenge fantasies on an erotica site. You do understand, people come here for porn, right? Not to read about how you wished your divorce had gone.

Forgive me if I'm not really commenting on the story. It was great.

It's just strange to see a profile and stories get wiped, then resurrected in a new profile.

Does anyone know the reason why?

Can Literotica restore the account?

The original Ephesus14 account is:

www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4320877&page=submissions

I'm not sure I read it the first time out, but either way, great job!

Should have stayed lost.

You can always trust lc69 to draw exactly the wrong conclusion.

Finally one tale that's not one of the regular low rated cuck ones. Even though this is a reposted tale, it deserves again the same rating: 5*.

Loved this story and glad it is back but I always wished there was a part 2. It just doesn’t seem finished. Glad you are putting your stories back up.

4 stars - after reading thousands of stories on here for the last few years, I have be challenged and extremely interested to read the next page. For the most part this was a good read, however, this is a porn website and although just out and out swearing is a bit gross, the occasional swear is nothing to sweat about and it does not bother me. So in future please do not make it an issue and just go with the flow.

Please keep writing.

Have a nice day

Using the word “realistic” for most LW stories is always a stretch. But this one had that vibe in it from start to finish. Well…except for the always silly wife announcing she’s going on a date trope 😎

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4 ****

Great story but needs better explanation and regret from the ex wife some form of closure on that end

There is too much stop-and-go in your story. The digression into who calls you, why, and why some make you mad was an unnecessary detour to answering a freakin' phone call. These are all through your story and are something all writers do. It's part of the creative process but hurts readability. That's by a good editor, or an honest self-edit removes them. Also, without a court order, you cannot toss a wife, and in most jurisdictions, even a couch-surfer out of your residence. These silly memes, tropes, and cultural oddities come to us from the early Literotica writers of this genre. Go back to the early 2000s, and you see the exact phrases (....account in my name only; ....love only you;) and made-up plot devices (closing/opening bank accounts online; every dude having a house "...in my name only"). They're worn out, tired, and mostly never were/no longer applicable. Write something original.

Leftovers even warmed up with a fresh side salad, are still... left over. It feels dated and worn.

First time reading. 2 critical points. 5 pages was about 2 to many, and... 5 pages, and no ending. As good as it was, it could have been way,,, way better.

I enjoyed this as much as the first time I read it

Read the original and without a doubt the best written story on this site bar none. I only wish I could give it more stars.

Yes, good the first time, this time also, but should have had a few things added. WHY was Darla such an extreme bitch and how long would it be before her bitchiness asserted itself again? And did Jodie recover from the hospital or not?

Glad you got this one back. It’s a great story.

Started out ok but ended disappointingly for reasons that Oatmeal1969 pointed out in his comment. Jodie was a template LW wife whose level of delusion allowed her to believe that it was fine for her to cheat on her husband but not acceptable for her boyfriend to do the same to her. The sex scene at the end almost seemed to steal space that could have been filled with a satisfactory conclusion to the drama.

A rare and good example of a real LW tale without the usual promotion of the unbelievable menhater fetish-cuck fantasies. Maybe a little followup would be interesting. Good job.

I have only given a half dozen fives to stories on this site. I oved this one and would love to see another chapter to this story.

Enjoyed reading this again. Thanks.

I was puzzled, though. At the bottom of the second online page, he calls Judy. At the top of the next page, as their conversation continues, they look in each other’s eyes. What did I miss?

I'm not saying you were wrong in where you ended it. I'm simply saying I would have liked more. As others have mentioned, there were several plot threads left hanging that I would have enjoyed seeing you resolve.

A lot of these stories contain passages where females are remarking to each other about things that males do. Quite often, the observations are followed by a statement like "You know how guys are", or "it's a guy thing". Both of those come from the generally accepted premise that females have some sort of innate understanding of the male psyche. And yet, every single one of these "dating outside of marriage stories" is predicated upon a total lack of understanding as to how the hubby will react. That is why so many LW stories feel unrealistic. If this wife had read a few LW stories she never would have tried to pull this off. I suppose that it can be said that assuming it would be okay with hubby is just one of several excuses that a wife might make in order to get her own way and that her over riding concern was how it was going to make it feel regardless of anything else. Remember: females do NOT have egos; only males do and they are always "fragile". In place of an ego, a female has desires, sentiments, and an empty head.

Why does he need a PI if he's supposedly going to tell him?

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"she really had nothing to lose by having a little fling" - Just because SHE'S confident that her marriage wouldn't be hurt, doesn't make it so.

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"I put the keys on the driver's seat." - Put the keys ON the driver's seat? He's not afraid of it being stolen?

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"Noting happened," IF true, might carry some weight if he didn't tell her that just getting in Stan's car was the breaking point.

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"slept all night, home the next day" - Must have slept in since she didn't get home until 11:45.

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"I heard him say 'Miss you, too, Jodie.'" - If she misses him, why not finish the divorce and go be with him?

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"She took a deep breath and looked directly in my eyes." - How can she look him in the eyes? They're on the phone!

I know we have to suspend disbelief for many (most?) of these stories,

I decided to make a phone call.

"Hello."

"Hello, Judy. This is Trey."

"She took a deep breath and looked directly in my eyes."

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Hmmm...

Loved it when I read it the first time - before it was deleted. Love it still! Thanks for writing it and thanks to those that found a copy to get it back up.

I enjoyed the first one. I really enjoyed this version. Glad you got back, hope for more. Thank you.

Looking forward to more of your older stories. I really liked the Tyler Jones story and would love read it again!

Well, I wondered if you would find them. This is the story I loved most. Please keep posting your lost stories. Maybe Literotica won't delete them again.

Kinda wish there was an epilog to reveal how Judy, Jodie and their family thought about Trey's new woman. Also the same with Darla's Grans...and what the hell happened to Stan. lol

Yes, there were some mistakes as pointed out by several, but overall it was a good story. I enjoyed it both the first time you posted it and now.

Hooked

Thanks for reposting. I love all your stories!

I definitely remember reading this storey some time ago, enjoyed it then and again now. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The wife's behavior is particularly confused, even for LW. The story would have been better with some attempt to explain it from the wife's perspective regardless of how crazy.

How did she drive the RV to his work with a cast on her arm?

Why do you people think you can set up a camera in someone else’s hotel room? When they show the video, his lawyer calls the police and PI is arrested, MC is arrested and lawyer ends up disbarred, although they would also be arrested in my state for trying to use it for financial gain.

Yes l remember this story. I liked the original and l like this one too.

I gave it 5/5 before and it still gets 5/5 now

Thank you and keep up the good work

I hope there will be more to this story!

I gave you five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ the first time ai read this. Today I gave you five more. Really great story!

“So I decided to be pro-active. But exactly how does one start being pro-active in a situation which may not even exist?”.. By proactive I thought he’d try to thwart / prevent her from going on her date. He just let her walk out the door into his car.

Good story, enjoyably long read. Well done, thank you.

I would 5 star this but I can't its a copy, read this ages ago was good then buy now its lpst its luster being a copy

You seem to have left some unburned bitches on the table. At least there was no reconciliation and you didn't write him into an affair with Judy. Many lesser authors would have done exactly that. The relationship with Darla was highly unlikely given her obvious personality defects. There was not enough in her backstory to account for her extremely sour attitude. But the strength of the writing gave you 4 stars on this one. Thank you for resharing.

Could have been a lot shorter, divorced the bitch wife, beat the shit out of Mr. Perfect period.

This is a classic! So glad it's back!

I do remember reading this story, a while ago, and loved it then. I do like re-reading stories I enjoy, so please keep reposting any of your old stories. 5*

I remember most of this story. Cannot Remember the finish.

I read your earlier version of this story a couple of years ago. I liked it then, and enjoyed it again now. Well done.