All Comments on 'My Wife Made Me a Maid and Wife Pt. 01'

I really wanted to love it, but wow, it was really hard to keep it all straight. You need to work on your grammar and general story telling

It's not bad at all, but you need to take out all of the exclamation points, they completely distract from the reading.

You should also go through and just edit it a bit for sentence structure.

Other than that it's a good story for the category that it's in.

part 2 please

I love your story. Does your wife need another sissy to train. I would love to volunteer. I crave to be a bisexual sissy cuckold for a woman that loves men as much as I do. But I also love women. I love to suck both.

Part 2 please. Very sexy and very hot.

Good thing I stopped reading after the first page. According to the comments, this is a story for mentally degenerate idiots!