All Comments on 'My Wife, Our Stories, Her Boss'

Sweet Vero83 ... Thanks for a good initial contribution to the LIT library. I liked the fact that dialogue carried most of the story. Too many authors depend too heavily on narrating the majority (or all) of the story. This has the potential (and hopefully, your intent) to extend by one or more chapters.

Warning that you may have already discerned ... many LW readers dislike cuckold stories and are ferocious in complaining about anything that suggests that tendency - and your tale leans heavily that way. Do not be discouraged ... perv on!

4*

Sets up a story and the writing is pretty good. Now, where does it go?

but if you take this into cucky land you will get hammered in comments and score.

This is a good story. I found the couple’s interactions believable. I hope there is a part 2.

She needs Eric's cock in her cunt. No fantasy just raw fucking that will fill her pussy with his seed

I like stories like yours where it starts off slow but exciting. You’re building it up into something potentially great. Looking forward to reading your next chapters.

I enjoyed it; I could imagine it happening as I read it. You really managed to put the reader into the story. Five stars from me. -- JB Edwards

Congratulations for your first story!!! Super hot talkings!!!!

Please, go on ;)

Please keep it going...

Lots of thought gone into it and a very sexy scenario and i love the mindful espect of it rather than just quick fucking from line 1...looking forward to the next instalment

This one of the best slow tease cuckold stories on Literotica.

The story is both very very erotic and 100% realistic. My cup of tea.

Great storyline.... Riveting reading, must have brought back a lot of memories from some of the readers who have been in a similar marital situation! Keep up the good writing :)

Love your story, gave you a 5 (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐)!

LOVE your story, gave you a 5.0=100% (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐)! Brilliantly written. Very very erotic! My wife & I had similar erotic conversations in bed.

This is a very popular story. It has got 57,854 views & 68 faves; that's 1.17 faves per 1K views (most stories get less than 0.4 faves per 1K views).

Amanda is a KEEPER. Period! Amanda is a KEEPER. Period!

nice nice build up nice idea but fuck!

I NEED MORE!

5

❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆

❤ = ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5.0)

:)

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😊

My kind of wife sex story!

I am not the only one thinks so: the story has so far got more than 1 favorite per 1K views which is rare.

Some women have a "boss fetish" and are happy when the boss makes a move on them. The hire up on the totem pole the boss is, the less likely he is to be rejected.

Brilliant! Bravissima! I rated this story

5.5/5 = 110%, ❤💚❤💚❤+ ("exceeds all expectations").

The storyline was very very imaginatively conceived and very well crafted!

Veronique1983, you are an excellent writer!

👍👍!

10 stars I hope her boss is black and he knocks her up!

I agree with Lickideesplit that your ability to write dialog is excellent. I've taken to skipping stories which are 100% narration, because they're not nearly as erotic to me as a story such as yours is. The husband and wife confessing and teasing only works though dialog, and you've taken it to perfection. More, please!

👍👍!

5.0 = 💯%

🙈 I've seen nothing

🙉 I've heard nothing

🙊 I never sad anything to enybody

a married woman can sleep with other men as long as both she and her lovers observe above rules

I would like to read how this story plays out

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this is soooo well written! Myself and probably many more can find similarities to their own sex live within this story. I do find the first episode the best. It’s all still a phantasy - like it is and stays with most of us in real live?!

Good job, veronique1983!

Look at all the anonymous cucks and their cute , colored hearts praising another piece of shit story about their fetish.

Crap.

The little BTB trolls hate for others to enjoy whatever makes them happy

Yuk!

fag

Another loser wimp husband and Don't have a guts to act like real man. .. Loser wimp

Hypergamy vs. Monogamy

My wife found this story and we both enjoyed it. Her eyes always light up when she finds a story about a MILF wife and a boss. Your story was one of the best!

The way you set this story up was just perfect and highly psychological. It explained how any husband’s inadequacies could cause him to push his wife toward infidelity.

The husband’s plans for career advancement didn’t pan out and, wife Amanda had to go back to work. He was left feeling economically inadequate and she was somewhat resentful.

Second, she had been a dancer, was beautiful and was way hotter than he was. He knew he was more attracted to her, than she was to him. Again, he was feeling inadequate physically.

Third, sex had just become another household chore for Amanda and she preferred having him wank off rather than sex. So, she started telling fantasies to get him off. He soon knew he was sexually inadequate.

When husbands feel inadequate in those three, core emotional areas it is often manifested in the way he views things, i.e. he thinks, “I’m not much and my wife deserves much better!”

In my case, I suffered all three of those inadequacies; plus, I have a very small dick which my wife calls, “cute.”

For any husband, it is natural that this psychology of inadequacy could lead him toward cuckolding. Almost every story we read in the Loving Wives forum includes a husband saying, “My wife is way out of my league. I don’t know how I got her to marry me!”

We would guess that: if a merely ‘typical or ho hum’ guy marries a hot, beauty model girl he is at least setting himself up for the possibility of being cuckolded.

Hypergamy, and mating with the strongest Alpha male are hard wired into any female, primate’s genes. That’s why the cheerleaders always dated the guy’s who had the nicest cars in high school!

Monogamy actually works against a female’s basic instincts. A weaker, or less desirable husband unconsciously knows how Mother Nature works. So, like the hubby in your story, he could start pushing their wives toward affairs with Alphas.

That is to say, in a tribe of primitive males, we ‘Beta’ males instinctively step aside and encourage our females to mate with the strongest male.

We love where your story is going! Amanda will soon be taking the cock of her boss, just the way Mother Nature intended!

Mt wife Naomi started working after our youngest started school. A few years later I had strange feelings about how one of her coworkers was hanging around later at parties that we had. Of course there were other coworkers there but he would stay later. When I questioned Naomi she said that Fred and his wife didn't really get along that well. I let it drop but I was watching as best I could. I was also told by a friend that I should keep an eye on him. I said I trust Naomi. He said he understood but the bastard was a slimy snake. There were 5 of us brothers and a few years before one of the brothers wives was sweet talked into cheating. The dumb bastard got mugged 3 time's over a course of 2 years. They never found out who the attacker's were. We had my oldest brother his wife and children over for a cookout. After eating I explained to him that I wanted him to bring up the story of Jed's wife. Naomi was mostly ears. She did have a couple questions. She said Omy when my brother told about the guy spending 4 days in the hospital. She asked what happened to the guy or guys that did it. He laughed they never figured out who it was. He said served the SOB right don't you think? Yes was all she said. I said I agreed I know for sure that I couldn't tolerate a cheater. Old Fred came to one more party and I smiled as I was putting more wood on the fire. I had broken a stick over my leg and said damn that sounded like an arm breaking. Fred jerked. Later my brother told me that he told Fred if he behaved it wouldn't be one of his bones. He never came to another party. I asked Naomi why Fred never came anymore was he and his wife still together? She said as far as she knew they were and he seems to be busy or something when we have had cookouts. I said what ever. I hardly ever heard of him again. That was fine by me.

Pretty sure husband is queer for sure he needs to get his head out of his ass. Try again. See if you can make a man out of him. At least seeing you can help him respect himself.

It would be better if when the speaker changes, the style changes. They both sound the same.

BTW the type of woman who likes to hear these fantasies in bed is the same type who would like to live them out for real—without you.

👍👍!

EROTIC

Amanda can make two men happy.

If you love her and want to be with her, you must let her be herself (which is "special"!) She will be sblr to make you happy or very happy.

Amanda is a KEEPER. Full stop.

My boss use to come to our house, go to the toilet and take my wife dirty satin underwear from the clothes basket. He would bring it back after coming in them and leave them in the basket. I asked my wife to wear the wet underwear full of his come. She first was reluctant but she did put them on

veronique1983 is an excellent story teller.

I really really loved this story, I can relate to what the hubby goes thru in this story.

Some men (yes, I am of them!) have a very strong voyeur side. Some of them get a major kick when they know the wife is cheating.

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

Dear Veronique. This was a delicious story and I want to read more!

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

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From the very beginning of our relationship I always suspected that I found her just a little hotter than she found me. Actually, make that a lot hotter than she found me. I'm OK in most departments, or almost OK. But Amanda was beyond words. She had been a dancer, and her body was perfect in the ways only a dancer's body can be. Long legs and arms, capable of singular elegance . . . and--let's be honest here--her tits were . . . again, just fucking beyond.

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Best I've read here. You capture both sides of the relationship with their open chat, even if she, and Clare, have to help him along with his confession. Honesty between husband and wife about their deepest desires is not common and so very hard to achieve. Hope you haven't left us, hoping for part 5.

I LOVE THE INTRO!

It sheds light on the changes in their relationship shortly after she went to work.

Excerpt ftom the story.

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... I could sense things changing as soon as she went back to work. Changing in the way we related physically, the way we touched, what we fantasized about.

From the very beginning of our relationship I always suspected that I found her just a little hotter than she found me.

I could sense things changing as soon as she went back to work. Changing in the way we related physically, the way we touched, what we fantasized about...

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My wife met my boss I was working for several years ago. that night when we went to bed, her pussy was soaking wet. So while I was fucking her, I said, "David was staring at you with lust in his eyes. He wants you so bad. " within seconds she was exploding her juices. Then I told her we could invite him to donner and I would be a couple hours late. Again, she lost it and came so hard, David became my go to chat when I needed her to com quick because I couldn't last.

Great Story

Good writer!!

My wife told me that her boss was flirting with her, this was going on for a while.

We talked about it in bed, both of us getting very turned on imagines her and her boss doing all sorts.

One night I asked her if she would let James fuck her.!!What!! she said ,we said we would keep it as our fantasy.

I know but I was thinking about it and I really want you to let him fuck you. Are you sure you want me to let James fuck me. YES I said, I just hope you feel the same. She said if I go through with this, there is no going back, it can't be undone. I am sure how about you.

Ok I will let him be more touches, I will even brush up against him.

The following Monday my wife Anna went to work wearing a shorter skirt, and a tight top showing off her 36c breasts. This went on for few days and Friday he asked her if she wanted to go to a hotel for dinner, and maybe staying the night. She said I'll just give Patrick a call letter him know I might not be home tonight, she called saying that her friend called and asked if she could come over, she sounded very upset, so I could be late home, if she needs me to stay I will let you know.

When I finished the call James put his arms around me, and gave my breasts a tight squeeze, after dinner we went to the room, and James made love to me twice before we fell asleep. I woke first and gave James a morning blowjob,after breakfast we were back to the room and this time James fucked me good and hard.

When I got home, Patrick took me to our bedroom took off my knickers and started licking and sucking my fanny as I told him everything we did.

I had meny more nights with James, and both Patrick and I loved every minute of it.

I am copy pasting this comment because I teally like it.

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Fifuxg, 24 months ago

Dear Veronique. This was a delicious story and I want to read more!

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MY WIFE, OUR STORIES, HER BOSS is an excellent wife sex story: 5- (4.65 = 93%).

Bravo!