by rohits600
The end of the story saved it...After all it was only a fantasy...I understand english isn't his native language, but here are somethings that don't depend on that: 1st - "Bil" was his wife's brother? if so why not tell it? 2nd - You said: "I always have a strange fascination for Incest...", so why not put this in Incest and not in LW? 2* for the ending...
as it should be, you worry about pleasing her
BUT, she should be worried about pleasing YOU
that DOS'T mean you pleasure is derived from hers, no it must be in an of itself yours
Marriage is this funny two way street
What a turn on! I would LOVE to see my super hot sexy girlfriend having a hot sexy encounter with another guy! Especially a family member! I am soo turned on by your story I need to strok my cock and cum all over my stomach and maybe lick it up! ;)
The wife's character is depicted very well. She is a decent & loyal loving wife who in the spur of the moment cheated on her husband. The WIFE is a KEEPER! She needs sex! She is classy.
The husband's desire to share his wife is kinky. He developed that kink because he loves, adores & worships his wife too much so that it borders on kink.
The story is very realistic.
The author masterfully depicted what goes on inside the husband's head & in his heart.
The story is kind of short, but rohits600 managed to tell us a quite a bit on half a page.