All Comments on 'My Wife's Adventures Ch. 02'

by bazar33

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fishgetterfishgetteralmost 9 years ago
Proof reader

It seems NOBODY uses the simple tool of Proof reading their posts!!! Can one not merely REread their story and see the blatant errors? When she, is suddenly a he, or the tenses are so messed up that we have to stop reading, and interject the correct ones. Also another thing is the continuity of the story. " She goes out, with no panties on, then wonders after screwing several time where her panties, are." The characters are up stairs , then, they have to go up to their( NOT there ) bedroom,etc. Just a good reread would be a Big help.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
white women

white women are easy ,everybody know's this.more so over big black cock.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

This whore apparently got an early start in life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

White trash cunt

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