All Comments on 'My Wife's Appetite'

She wants her husband to bring his ex-wife home so they can fuck her? This would have been better off in Erotic Couplings or maybe in "The Dumb Shit" category.

1 star

You better explane a better ending

"The Dumb Shit" catagory! I think that is an excellent idea.

I like the former fiancé idea.

Unfortunately this story feels rushed, skipping a lot of emotional misgivings... the revenge or "getting even" actually fails, because Nina is honestly thanking them for an amazing experience. (or is trying to just before she rushes out.. seemingly completely naked without bothering to get dressed or even grab her discarded clothes (an idea which i quite like).

But the the story just.... stops... it doesn't end... it just stops...

So ... to be continued? I mean... Slowly manipulating having Nina as a sex-toy/slave could be a very interesting twist...

You lit into the author like he committed some horrible sin. He just fucked his ex with a solid humiliating round of lesbian fucking to boot. They left the ex feeling like a well used whore. Well done!

Changing POV is not good.

"Nina felt a bit suspicious." - Hubby is narrating, he can't know what Nina is thinking. Have her say it: "I don't know, I'm a little suspicious."

Cute Story...Sounds like everybody had fun and got off....