by a1fiend
After about 6 paragraphs, I gave up. If English is your first language, you are in need of an editor. If English is NOT your first language, you are in dire need of an editor.
this whole story is fucked up from the start, you one sick bastard, that is no way to treat women, I would love to take a belt to your ass and rape your ass and see how you like it. It is clear you have no respect for women. 1 star
After scanning your other stories, it is clear you are a woman hater and should have a bullet put in your head
We need another chapter on how he broke wife in then one all together
I gave it a 1, I hated to do that, but there was no option for negative ratings. No redeemable social or entertainment value, from a sick mind.
I am not even going to rate this.You need to find something else to do with your life. If that is how you fuck women then your a psycho. F*** u
Rachel need to hire some gay bikers to run a train on on his ass! Chain gang style. Then have them visite her dads and tear him a new asshole also
Judging by the word "mate" and use of kilos, I'll guess you rare from, or the story is set in Australia.
If so, remind me not to visit! :)
In the future for stories that contain particularly hardcore things, include a disclaimer.
A Fucked up story, about a Fucked up family, written by a Fucked up writer!!! Totally Fucked up!! But you told us that with the title of the Fucked up story...