All Comments on 'My Wife's GF Bring Her Black BF Ch. 01'

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Anthony1965Anthony1965over 2 years ago

Please continue writing. I love this story.

allisonswetallisonswetover 2 years ago

Great start. Need to review and edit a bit more before publishing.

jblacklovejblackloveover 2 years ago

Yes, please. Great start!

DeeannamontanaDeeannamontanaover 2 years ago

This sort of scenario is very personal to me.

Would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like the scenario: I would like the two female protagonists (Monica and Bella) to become more and more dominant towards Max and get excited to see him buggered by Jamal, for their own emotional pleasure; then they may decide to turn Max into a girl in the clothing and eventually Bella and Monica will both become pregnant with Jamal.

EhsheehsheEhsheehsheover 2 years ago

I love the story I think it should evolve further maybe even feminization of the husband

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start looking forward to more

liz33ndliz33ndover 2 years ago

i do like this, but it was difficult to read. i love the idea.

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 1 year ago

Love this story. I too am a lover of BBC.

PornboxPornboxover 1 year ago

Decent start but needs some editing to make it readable

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###Currently working on GF's Dad next chapter. Thanks for your patience and support.### If you think my story deserves a 1-star rating, you should stop reading erotica, or at least mine. There are only two possible outcomes; either you like it or cum so hard. Otherwise, you s...