by jc1961
Why is it called illustrated if you cant see the pictures bit of a prat for that jc 1961
I thought at first that it was my computer that wouldn't let the pictures open, but reading a comment, can see that I am not alone. Great story, but the illustrations would have helped tell the story.
There were illustrations originally. They must not have transferred in.
You need to get your act together Literotica,
Two illustrations stories and neither one of the loads the pictures
... at least no the author, though maybe a catty reader or two.
I'm seeing "broken" pics in other illustrated stories as well. Probably a glitch in the upload process.
Hope jc1961 will ignore the snark and repost.
I sent them a revised draft with the illustrations. Please check back soon.
That's at least 2 Illustrated stories today with no picture
Remove those white spots : we're adults, consulting an erotic site.
Story really nice i hope you keep going. Did you or literotica edit the pics?
And then all the fun begins! What a story - so realistic
Sorry, the site requires the white outs. I had the story returned to me for edit without them.
Great story. Who are the actors in the photos? Are these people you know?
Great story and good artwork. Would have given five stars but for the white outs.
Sizzling hot tale. Similar to watching a porn flick but much better with meaningful dialogue.
Your story is a tour de force. Period.
Thank you.
Interesting, the masks and the dots were a total distraction.
I love how ordinary the characters are in the illustrations...not at all typical porn stars. And because of that, the story becomes more real and hotter.
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
What a great story and pics ...wow ..
Just the white dots took a little from it ..but i def came hard well done
Oh, JC, you have given me an awesome story!! Thank you very much. I only wish my frigid wife was as open to swinging as yours has become. How often do you get to play with other couples? When you fuck other women, does your wife cheer you on and talk dirty? I'm guessing, now that you have wonderfully unleashed her sexual lusts and inhibitions, that she may be even more anxious than you to get a wet pussy to eat out, or a new cock penetrating her moist cunt in front of you. Could that be true? Please email me and tell me your most perverted experiences and thoughts. I would love ❤️ to hear all of them as I masturbate. You know I'll be fondling my dickmeat and asshole as I enjoy your expanded writing about this. Just like you did when your friend, Roger, showed you how much your sexy, horny wife loved getting Elaine's pussy and Roger's big dick. Have you tasted his cum as it shot into your mouth recently? Looking to hear from you.
Love, sucks and fucks,
Bob
find_two2@hotmail.com
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Great story and a scenario that I often had / have a desire for. Delighted it all worked well for you two.
Good story, why not, when you get to sixty you are running out of time to be physically active at anything, so if sex with other people is consensual and fun ok, just hope the relationship is strong enough to survive the jealousy when wifey gets more cock than hubby gets pussy with his average cock.
Nice attention to details. And lots of emotion, which adds a quality of personalism and eroticism.