All Comments on 'My Wife's New Girlfriend'

What a lovely hot story about two people who are clearly deeply in love with each other

Really loved this story .

Little wonder Maggie looked horrified---if I remember rightly she was a strong supporter of your romance with Jodie. Sounds like you deserve an Oscar for your performance, Anna. I did chuckle at the "Cheeky cow!" comment. Be careful, Giselle, maintaining a different accent can be difficult---might easily give the game away and then where would you be?

Funny story; delightfully erotic. Jodie and Anna - a perfect match.

Deliciously seductive!

Loooove Giselle... can't wait to meet her.

So marriage is just a technical decision, for tax purposes? Clearly it's meaningless to this couple in any other context.

Equal parts sexy and adorable. I loved it.

Soooo, when did Jodie know?

To the person who clearly hadn't read the story and who made a judgement on my intensely loving relationship with my wife you clearly didn't read it and even hid behind being anonymous. How dare you! If you read Five Years you would know that what you said was complete bs. I am so mad right now and I also know you will not read this comment.

What a playful and healthy marriage yall have. Loved this story 💞

I’d guess she knew as soon as she looked in her eyes. You can change the look, but not the look of love. Wonderfully sweet and sexy story of imagination, lust and love

TERRIFIC and I wish more people would be into role playing, it could add so

much to lovemaking.

I adore you two totally. I would also love to peek inside the treasure box where you keep all these wonderful ideas. You are a genius. xx

I finally feel like I know you. The you with someone you truly love. We have fun but this,,, oh Anna. She’s so Lucky. Xoxox

I love the deliciously sensual playfulness of this. But most of all I love what it says about you and Jodie and your relationship

Can't improve o what FriskyMind and ells wrote. I totally love it!

This is one of the most beautiful and romantic stories ever! Worth making it into a short movie. :)

I really enjoyed that story ... bit of a fantasy of mine

This is such a fun story! 5 stars!

In your introductory "Biography" tab you tell us that certain stories are basically autobiographical and you give us a reading sequence to follow, ending with this one. I have enjoyed the journey and look forward eagerly to tapping your fictional offerings. Almost all of the comments have been positive and I too admire you and through you Jodie.

You tell your story simply yet elegantly and with endearing humility. You tell your story without melodrama; the only conflict stems from your human failings and your inner demons. And yet I find them utterly engaging.

It's impressive how you've bookended your story of Jodie with two playful subterfuges. In your first encounter Jodie established a doppelganger of the wicked boss. And here you prank her with a phony vamp. That's brilliant. Ultimately I have to wonder if all the bricks have been allowed to fall and the wall has flattened.

You stand out among the throng of Literotica authors for your superb craftsmanship. Your lexicon and word choices and limpid style all mark you as a master of the English language. You appreciate and apply the differences between the transitive verbs "to lay" and "to raise" and their intransitive counterparts "to lie" and "to rise" without visible effort, which is a talent 99% of Lit authors lack. If I am inclined to flyspeck, all I can point to is an occasional confusion of "it's" for "its," which I chalk up to typographical error.

Most of all, I appreciate that reading your stuff makes me a better human being. I thank you.

So good! Lucky Jodie!

Such a fun read!