All Comments on 'My Wife’s Wild Desires'

What was this? It reads like a recurring psychotic dream some inmate ffom a mental hospital would have, No thanks!

Please proof read your stories or have someone else read them before submitting them. They make no sense as to what you are trying to say. Maybe English is not your first language and your message gets lost in translation.

Fantastic storytelling

Painfully unoriginal, and as always the subject matter is pure bullshit.

TAGS?

Without tags your readers have no idea what is included in the story that may offend or displease them.

I liked this story. very hot.

Your story line was good! You didn't push the 'story wife' too far.... you made it seem that she wanted to be an exhibitionist.

Do work on your writing. You need to learn to use commas to join sentences with similar descriptions together. Read some literary books in English and you will notice what I mean.

You definitely can tell a story though.

Now I have read the comments of others. Don't take offense that they did not like your writing. I'll bet none of them have ever tried to write in Sanskrit or any foreign language.

As for the storyline being 'bullshit'.... what would you expect from a imaginative writer?

Some authors really have shit for brains. Rotten minds come up with rotten stories.

Keep writing.