All Comments on 'My Wife's Yoga Instructor Ch. 01'

19" cocks, bulls, what crap! I know my 1 star won't stand but it's this piece of garbage is worth.

A 1 9 inch cock that he can rest on his own chin! He is 19 and stands 6'11" " , 300 lbs, perfect musculature and sweet? A wonderful story but too late for April Fools. If you're trying to be serius , dude you fittin to get killed here. 19" has to be a LW record.

I am sure several men he cucked would pay good money to see pictures from that night.

once a slut always a slut same story as the rest who would want read this get a life

Why didn't you write that he had a 20" cock or one that reached to his knees? 19" just seems so fake, you know what I mean? Then again, I think stories about guys with monster dicks are written either by kids or by guys living in mom's basement with one hand on the keyboard and the other in their pants.

Give up writing your crap

I read the first three paragraphs, deciding not to read further. Seems this author is also misled in understanding that most women do not like large penises. This is the theme of porn, so to sell penis enhancement which do not work, and can be dangerous....

really? I gave you 2 stars and that was 3 more than I should have given you

I don't like cuck stories, as they aren't realistic, but I like this.

I know... not realistic, but it couldn't happened to a nicer guy.

Just stupid!

I never criticise writers but this is nonsense. Why not make his dick 36 inches as that would be as realistic as this.

Also I don't care what anyone says, she should be history. Regardless of your sexual proclivities, no one should be treated with such disrespect.

If you continue this please let him find someone who actually loves him.

I didn't enjoy this at all. I thought somehow he would get what was coming to him after years of being the other guy but the way this was written it wasn't really erotic or exciting or anything. Boring, actually.

But thank you for writing.

so how long will the stupid bastard put up with the bitch grow some balls and just leave you don't need a whore like her surly you are going to continue on with this story and have him get some revenge or are you a cuck as well

one star

science fiction

I would love suck his cock in front of my wife. Big hard on, more please!

Should I puke or laugh my ass off???

This was badly written drivel. And I'll ignore the cock size baloney. His wife tells him she's cheating on him and is going to continue cheating on him. With some kid that's probably fucking dozens of other women. Hubby needs a divorce before she passes alone a nasty or fatal disease to him. What moron would touch her cunt with a ten foot pole? He simply needs to take a couple of the pictures (what kind of special idiot takes pictures of herself cheating?) to his attorney and divorce her, keeping all the marital assets. Unless she wants all of her family and friends to she her in action. Moronic story not worth the time spent to read it. Go away. Stay away.

No stars as even giving this garbage 1 star would be an insult to the star.

`Please abandon all thoughts of a `chapter 2`

Gay cuck Anime.

- Yeah. How 'bout thanks but no thanks.

1*

Please don't.

lost all respect for the gay men writing on this site pretending too be straight.and women who hate men.

1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Shouldn't the height be in meters or the weight in pounds?

Bullshit!

I hope the bull moves in with the couple!

It's your first story and I usually try to offer constructive criticism to new writers, but in your case the first thing you need to do is research information about the human body. After that write a story about some of your experiences; maybe that'll keep you out of fantasy land.

No score!

Guy marries a size queen and events proceed to their logical conclusion...

What crap

Am I the only one who thinks this is a joke? A nineteen inch cock that the woman is crazy for. Where does he put it? No one could consciously write something this bad. Even the cuckrats, who praise any and all cuck stories, aren't touching this one.

Actually read fist 10 lines then stopped.its that bad

I actually agree with "carolinadreamer" this time, except I will score this a ONE STAR

This was just stupid...can't believe that I actually read most of it before I stopped....I guess I just hoped it would get better...no such luck

I saw a joke porno where a two foot dildo in the woman’s vagina was ‘visible’ in her mouth. That’s about the effect required here and it cracked me up picturing it!

Man, I've read Hentai that were more realistic. HENTAI, goddammit!

lmfao. Shit, man, this should DEFINITELY have been added in 'fetish.'

A 19 inches cock... And a 5 foot tall chick being into it! lol. Oh, so dumb.

Well, I really enjoyed this story, and hope to see more in the future. There aren't many writers that make this type of stories, and even less in this quality, compared to other authors I've read, this is really good. Not everyone enjoys erotica with oversized body parts, but there is still a group of readers like me that find this exciting. Don't worry about the negative comments, it isn't a reason to stop doing want you like. Maybe in the future you will get the readers that you deserve.

What we have here is an instant classic in the size fetish genre. Author, never mind the critics who decry it for being unrealistic. First of all, their point is already invalid because there most definitely do exist real human penisia (plural for "penis" I remembered just now) in excess of 19 inches, and secondly, just GTFO of here if this kind of stuff offends you. For fuck's sake, it strikes to the core of human sexuality on a primal, even a cosmic level. Modest boobs and meager dicks can get the job done, but massive breasts and monster cocks are far more fun. It is a pity that our physical evolution has lagged behind our imagination. Nevertheless, you can do your part to create a better tomorrow -- just fap fap fap to shit like this. And if you can, create and share some more good and wild smut of your own.

... is their own admission that this grotesque story had no business being here!

You damn right, 'sensible' reviewer - this is indeed a fetish!

Man, LIT should start thinking about making a category for that...

Thanks for all the thoughtful feedback and criticism, everybody.

Does the category really bother you that much? I figured, you know, it's about a woman's infidelity, so put it in Loving Wives.

As a die-hard fan of size fetish content, this is incredible so far! Keep it up!

Are there actually people who can take this farce as serious erotica? The author says it's serious literature and belongs in LW. There's not a humor section, so I guess LW is as good as anywhere.

Serious literature? I didn't say that at all. Right at the start I note it's unrealistic.

The question in my last comment was genuine, seriously.

A five foot tall woman could not take a cock much over 6 inches in her vagina. The length of a vagina is based on a woman’s height. So a cock bigger than what can fit in her vagina has no effect on the woman!

For something to be entertaining, there must be at least a sliver of reality about it. As a therapist, I've counseled several couples with mismatched genitalia, and what you write about is beyond fantasy. These characters, Jason and Jess, would not be able to copulate without injury to one or both. The adjective "silly" comes to the fore.