All Comments on 'My 'Working' Mother'

Now that was a different bend to an old theme.

Good job.

A very different kind of mother and son incest, kinky and hot but still a bond of love between them that worked for them.

It would really be kinky to have a mother that was a prostitute and that let her son have freebies.

Thanks for the good read

Like it all but it the ending was to quick and light on detail, like you got bored with the story line or ran out if ideas. I re-write with a extended ending would add valur to the story.

And I love dirty stories! Yes, it ended too abruptly, could have been a little better, but still very dirty worth a perfect rating.

Nicely written, great dialogue, and a very original mother/son story.

Great job. And I hope there's a part 2 in the works.

This was an interesting story. I really liked it.

I love the way you developed the characters and how it all seemed so natural - not the usual penetration story.

Venus

loved that plot, creative, and nicely written-two nice characters and hot sex good

job thanks

Very good writing and character development. But there is much more to this story that needs to be developed. Please complete the story....

Great Story

lightweight and easy flowing story well written

Next Chapter ?

Although I was not in the least turned on by the descriptions of sex with her clients or the fact that she was a working prostitute, the story had several redeeming qualities. I liked the fact that the son looked up his birth mother, I liked the attitudes of his foster parents, I enjoyed the growing relationship between Andy and Liz, and I liked the protective element of Andy for Liz. This is a good stand alone story but I agree with other comments that a followup story would be greatly appreciated. You show very good writing skills. You seem to be a very good story teller.

To quote digdaddyrich, "It would really be kinky to have a mother that was a prostitute and that let her son have freebies."

Kinky? Perhaps, but I know for a fact that it has happened, and in much the same way as described here. Mine is a long story, and one I'm trying to get down on paper (as it were) so I can place it in here.

A well written analysis of an unusual situation, and handled with delicacy and tact.

Thanks for this excellent example of how I would like to be able to write.

i dont think so a loving mother cant chenge in a cold love less mother to her child at any cost even if her husband die never a mother always love her child not only human mother all mother. perdon my English.

the good is how matter of fact she is about what she does. No, heart of gold, saver her from this life nonsense.

Pretty good story! I like how it develops but perhaps Andy could have a massive cock that draws Liz away from prostitution.

With the way the story started... I absolutely hated the way it ended! If there must be mother-son incest then don't start this way!

This was a very well written story. I really enjoyed the call girl aspect as well as the mother and son bonding. I really hope that there will be a part two to this story. This story aroused me to the point of having one of the best orgasms of my life. Very nice job overall.

That's a different story. 5*

Very well written!

Why couldn't he find her as a just normal person, recovering alcoholic?

This is an unusual story. In fact, it is the first ifits kind I have. For an 18 year old, the son is very mature, both psychologically and emotionally. He sees the woman as a sexual being who happens to be his lost birth mother. (Notan adequate description but the best I can do.) The mother has accepted her past and present circumstances. She has accepted her life and bows to no one. She has survived. She is proud of her son's maturity. 5 star story for more reasons than I care to mention.