All Comments on 'My Young Hot Mom'

Love it, hot sexy story. I hope you keep going with this and maybe he becomes man of the house and makes a baby with Mommy.

An average story that really needs an editor.

Good premise, painful read. Needs editing.

Too short. All he did was blow a nut into her just like the previous guy. What happened to “I could do a better job of pleasing her” that the son said earlier.

This reads like a rushed effort. Write, edit, write some more, edit again

LOL ... 35 is NOT young ...not by any stretch of the imagination ... by 35, the wrinkles are starting, and the tits are already sagging

Very good, maybe a bit rushed. Thanks.

Tc

His mom needs to make him a father.

Well I for one liked this very much. I hope there is more to CUM!

You NEED an editor

Horrible cuckold porn. If the woman desired by the protagonist has sex with somebody else, it's NTR and an extremely rare fetish, and should not be published without clearly announcing this.

To short, how was the son better than the last guy? Next time proof read first.

It was a pretty good read... right up to where they rolled over and went to sleep. I would have thought that as horny as Mom was, she'd have been all over him.

You need to proofread your work. I had to re-write several parts to make it really make sense.

This could easily been a five page story. As it stands, it's rather unsatisfying.

Waaaaaa waaaaaa waaaaaa it’s porn not the noble peace prize or Pulitzer. Enjoy it and stop acting like snobs.

Double Ds with implants is a turnoff.

I enjoyed the story - I hope there is a part 2. Please keep writing

Well done! Satisfying many a man's latent desires.

Admittedly a few typos or grammatical spoofs, but none so glaring as to quell the direction, and outcome, of the story. That is . . . at twenty and horney, this young man should have been ready for seconds before the MILF fell asleep.

5 paragraphs and it was the best sex she ever had.....

Sorry to hear that 😳

spelling errors

GOOD BUT TOO SHORT.

That writing begs the answer to "what grade of middle school are you in?"

Get an editor!

Story was fine. Too many self appointed critics about things. Read the story you don't like it move on

5 stars and a second chapter please

"'I hope this is enough to get your business,' she laughed pulling the mans pants off."

So what? Is mom whoring for her company to get business?

It’s good, but which part indicates that the mother is a pornstar?

I'd like it more if it wasn't so rushed and took things slower

Waiting for the next installment:-) Love It.

Loved it. All mothers should be so nice.

I wish my Mom would have been like that. Loved it.

Good and hot

wow. never ever had anything like it. what a thing to dream about. thanks

So many mistakes it not funny, takes away from the story, it just another boring story with oversized tits and cock and was rushed. one star.

Hot, but would have been hotter: (1) If the story was lengthened and allowed the sexual tension to build; (2) If the story continued, to tell the long-term outcome; and (3) If you worked with a good editor, to clean up mistakes and continuity errors. Keep going.

Go back to old

Complete junk.

GOOD WHILE IT LASTED...FIVE STARS!

Hey great story. I've being fucking my mom for the past 2 years. I really enjoys it. I hope it lasts forever.

What is it with the "implants?" Plastic tits may APPEAR nice inside clothes, but with the clothes off, they are so obviously fake, they are a turn off. That's in addition to them feeling like crap when they are fondled and played with.

The first date with a plastic titted woman is the last one.

All of that, coupled with her head's need to falsely enhance her chest, combine to be a major downer.

By the by, peak is the top of something, such as a mountain peak.

Peek is a sneaky look.

Great content - I'd have given it 5 stars. It is in serious need of editing for typos & grammar though. As other commenters have mentioned, there are so many of these types of mistakes it's a distraction from reading. A little more length with a slower build-up, maybe over a few days until the final fucking scene would have been even better. Keep up the great work.

Very nice story gave it 4 stars because it was to short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hope you knocked her up got my mom and aunt sametime both having my 2 kids next month

Why would any woman want plastic tits?? If they are big, they don't look real, AND they feel like shit.

Enjoyed to read about how much mom og son enjoy each others genitalia and fucked of energi.

I compare these types of stories to Ford Mustangs. If it was me driving I know that I would really enjoy it but to look at it doesn't do much because there are so many of them out there that the site of them isn't very exciting. Just another Mustang that is the exact same as most of the others I see.

Awesome so far 5 stars 111111111111

Liked the story but not much sex (just the one time) and it was to damn short 4 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT

Why the fuck did she get plastic tits???????????? YUCCO0O0!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The7y feel like shit.

Flipping from first person to third person just disrupted it and then there was just kind of too much hyperbole. Kind of inane and parts that were just plain bad.