All Comments on 'Mystery at the Gloryhole'

by Jimbo545

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lantern04lantern04about 2 months ago

I hope you have more chapters in the works.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Definitely needs a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Long time reader, very rarely post….this needs a second chapter. In my humble opinion at least two or three chapters.

Bumpkin58Bumpkin58about 2 months ago

Well written, fun premise. Hopefully you will continue to explore the storyline in future updates.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Hot story, cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

not bad and you have lots of places you can go with this please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Thanks, this may well be any boy's dream. Keep it up please!

Jimbo545Jimbo545about 2 months agoAuthor

There will be a few more chapters. I've already written half of the next one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

So ,much coincidence for one so . . . Uninitiated?

Proof Reading required.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very good start - keep it going

NekoNomadNekoNomadabout 2 months ago

For the love of the sex gods, PLEASE KEEP GOING!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Would have liked if it was a longer story hope there will be more to come.

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