by Jimbo545
Long time reader, very rarely post….this needs a second chapter. In my humble opinion at least two or three chapters.
Well written, fun premise. Hopefully you will continue to explore the storyline in future updates.
not bad and you have lots of places you can go with this please keep it going.
There will be a few more chapters. I've already written half of the next one
So ,much coincidence for one so . . . Uninitiated?
Proof Reading required.
Would have liked if it was a longer story hope there will be more to come.