All Comments on 'Mystery Lover'

by Writerly417

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ctdansctdansalmost 5 years ago
hope?

If you only get off in fantasy situation then there is little hope.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
It was ok

But if you’re only issue is sex, then what the fuck are you doing to fix it? The wife sounded like a whiny bitch who wants her husband to know exactly how to get her off but won’t tell him what she likes, or wants but will shut him down whenever he wants to get freaky.

It isn’t his fault the marriage is in trouble...it’s hers and she needs to figure out if she wants to save it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Sweet

Based on the other stories, I have to think this author is a man. But he handles his female characters well especially in this story written in a woman's voice. Good job.

imhaplessimhaplessalmost 5 years ago
Entertaining

Need I say more? 5*

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 5 years ago
Thanks writerly, solid 5. Unique, realistic, no cheat ending

Variety of sex was a nice change of pace.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Outstanding

A good story distinguished by great writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful

Yes, very well written. Nice story.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Rimming? Eat shit and die.

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