by Paul Lucas
I loved the Naga and your characterization of the princess. Wonderful story. Good work. Can't wait to read your next piece.
AN excellent, alluring fantasy vision rife with erotic appeal, it was most captivating.
It had all the elements of a cautionary fable, all the vivid description of a popular fantasy novel, and all the explicit detail of a fulfilling erotic story.
Very well done. All-around. Bravo.
Great fun, entertaining characters, love the snake fetish! Fine writing, better than most. Keep up the good work!
I am most certainly looking forward to what the Queen will do to/with the Princess next! Perhaps breed her personally, spawning ever-smarter Naga?
I have been a science fiction/fantasy reader since I was 14. This instantly became a favorite. Looking forward to the book.
Please make another one where she gets her intellect back and doesn't just think like a wild animal and is returned to her Naga form