All Comments on 'Naked'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why is the male in all your stories so predatory and gross? I can't relate to and identify with the situation because I'm not an asshole like the dude is, and I can't observe and enjoy the situation because it's just a woman being treated sub-par, which is not exactly sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More of the same...

You write very well, but this is just the same as most of your other stories. Time for some variety?

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