All Comments on 'Naked'

WOW. This is an amazing story, leaving me with feelings I thought had left me a long time ago.

If a 50 star rating was available it still would not be sufficient for this quality.

Thank You.

A five rating, because the female character was depicted to sound like a real mom!! "A shadow is at the base of her abdomen. PUBIC HAIR, vaguely visible in the mist."

Very, very good!

I loved this work, like a breath of fresh air in a lush evergreen forest right after a fresh rain in the spring.

You have a wonderful writing style that truly paints a picture of a fine arts scene as seen through the eye of an undernourished observer seeking emotional fulfilment.

Which is rare on this site.

And for that, I thank you in the most heart felt way!

Sincerely,

B4PW.

Good story! Sort of melancholy…almost Hemingway-like. I liked it!

DesmondAndromeda = 12 points 🏆💐

Thanks! Excellent work. A mother who 'knows' her son. A mother who sees his needs and a mother who shares a special moment. All the ingredients for a wonderful experience. And that she lets him taste her anus? What a wonderful mother and a dutiful son.

With Oscar Wilde and Gustav Klimt as visual aids and the dulcet tones of Cole, a sip of fine wine, they had a brief moment in time. A time that they could and would cherish, for the rest of their lives.

One of the best I have read. Ray

I enjoyed every line. So sad that it was with mother and son plus having a husband in between. But even though religion and society condemns. Giving time and space it happens we can not combat the power of survival of the specie. This is what this all amounts to, survival of the specie,

It ‘s the reality of life continuation.

Perfect! Thanks

Outstanding!

Great story with descriptive encounters culminating in fucking your mom & it sounds like the best that it could ever be.

5 stars

Seaside, an endless crash of the waves, Adirondack chairs, sea breeze, Gustav Klimt and a mother and son in a cabin. The result? A masterpeice woven together from the elements listed above and more. A free mind conjures up a vision of beauty, passion bringing two kindred souls together, in a passionate embrace, from the greying hair, tawny eyes, a pussy and her anus, waiting to be relished and to nourish him.

Bravo! Perhaps Klimt had a similar scenario in mind, as he painted his damsels and to have Nat King Cole accompanying the two, into that “Unforgettable” experience and the mother saying: “But these will become our memories, our secrets," she says. "We'll always have them. And whenever we're with other people, glance at me every now and then. I'll wink, and you'll know I'm thinking of these secrets. They belong only to you and me.”

Such unforgettable memories remain, for a long time.

They can not be displayed in a museum, be etched onto an LP record or narrated sipping tea and cake, but they are omnipresent.

The most beautiful ,intense erotic story I’ve ever read. Superb

While the story plot is good, describing it in simple present tense kills the joy of reading this erotica. Two stars only.

Simply marvellous. By far the best story here.

The prose is poetry. The story is sublime.

Beautiful. If you are younger than 40, you don't understand it. Not "won't"; but "don't".

You have embraced seduction, lust and tenderness in a gentle dance …well timed and accomplished. Bravo!

WOW, thank you for sharing that.

I've read a lot of stories on here & undoubtedly this is by far the best. Fantastic story & an ever greater turn-on.

WOW !!! Thank You..

Awesome romance❣️❣️❣️.

Awesome!

Excellent

Great read and beautifully written, bravo!

This story is the absolute ebodiment of my GREATEST fantasy for myself and Mother that I have EVER read. I would give anything in the world to have a vacation like this with her.

Wonderfully done! Sweet, romantic, and erotic.

Extraordinary!!!

Hard as fuck finding a story like this. Author: your amazing! Saved, keep writing!

Well done. 5🌟

The best story on Literotica – by far.

Great en beautiful

Thank you for such a touching and erotic story. So we’ll written, you have a gift. I hope you continue to share it

Fantastic, I like it when it takes a long time to fully develop to the copulating. The ones that start there are not as good.

So well written! I love it! Thank you.

Perfect

Lust and love can get so mixed up, I felt both while reading your story.

This story is too sad to be erotic.

Is it possible to give this story a 10? It was FABULOUS!!!

Best story I’ve read so far. 5 stars.

Beautiful story, so real, so believable. Loved every bit of it. Please continue to write more.

I thought the writing was excellent and well thought out.

This is a wondetful stoty about mom and son , declaring thier love and lust for each other. Its designd style of writeing makes me wonder if this is a true story. Whatever the reason for its content. Its a wonderful writtdn story with all thr emotion and desite put in at the right moment. Thank you for a wonderful story !!!F

It was like experiencing The Beatles for the first time, or Schindler's List, or Shakespere in Love...you eclipsed the genre and meaning of what the website is for and capable of, and I was caught unprepared to have my heart opened against my will...Will read your other stories with great interest.

Your power of wordsmithing makes it seem so real, I loose myself in the moment.

Thank you.

There's so much more here than the very hot sex it conveys. Just the fact that the word "tits" never appears is enough to suggest that even though the guy is the narrator, I could believe that this story was written by a woman.That is something I've never before felt from reading a mother-son incest story, and I've enjoyed a lot of them. From beginning to end this tale is infused with artistic sensibilites, making the breezes, the sand, the surf, the warm sun, the cold drinks, along with the love-making and the love, all seem tangible. The usual air of male lust is underplayed and woven into the feelings the pair experience. Great story!

Such a lovely story, slow and gentle, as to just peek over a fence and see what could be. A story of love and the pace and tone perfect and simple. I really enjoyed it and yet saddened by the ending, going back to the way things always have to be. Commitments and deadlines, the many things that consume our lives, with only the beautiful memory of what happened between two people with pure, sweet love.

I've been dreaming & fantasizing about mom ever since I found pics of her.

What skill you have in expressing true, but yet forbidden, love.

I had no hesitation in doing just that for this brilliant story! Many thanks.

Now to read the rest of your contributions.

m222rjr

So well written, couldn't and didn't want to stop reading, thank you.

Wow! It's a masterpiece. Hardly an erotica. As good as it gets. A sequel maybe? I just can't wait for it. Superb and thanks a lot.

Beautifully brings to life the culmination of years of familial affection, turned passionate. The joyous joining of mother and son. Meant to be. At once perverted and precious. So worth the guilt.

Rarely will one have such an experience with his mom, however never turn it down. Just sayn.

What an incredibly beautiful story. Very well done.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

I LOVE stories that are very sensual and slowly unfold, constantly making you hope this is going to lead into more and more. They are always the hottest stories to me. I try to write my own stories like that, but you have it mastered. Tremendous job !!!!

Well constructed with deliberate pacing that shows the confidence of a skilled writer. Very few of the word usage errors that show up in most entries on this site (lightening instead of lightning). Great story!

So well written. I came a gallon to this. Thank you.

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I was drawn into this story apace with its slow and leisurely ascendancy. Surely you were inspired by the Lawrence masterpiece mentioned. I almost had a mental orgasm somewhere along the way.

Some years ago there was a prolific contributing author at this site. Alwayswantedto was his mom de plume. I considered him to be the epitome of mother and son stories, once calling him the muse of the genre. Unfortunately he stopped submitting and requested that his stories be removed from the site. I believe you have assumed his mantle. Kudos to you.

Wow - terrifically written !

I just love the Pace of the story and the element of introspection which seems present throughout.

You hardly ever went overboard - loved how you created an ambience.

Just like reading a movie.

I'll catch up on rest of your stories.

This is about the best story here. Absolute perfection. I would have licked her pussy after she peed, but that is just me.

It is so beautifully written! It shows the depth of two peoples love for one another. It quietly leads you a place where two peoples love is required to an amazing simple solution. By far the best story I’ve ever read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

What a beautifully written story! Yes, it has sex but it's more about the intimacy and love between two people that just happen to be mother and son. This has to be the best story I've ever read on this site and I almost hated to reach the end.

Truly, a beautiful, fabulous story.

Your story is one of unfettered intimacy without a care for the morality card that society places upon this type of relationship. Love between these two based on a wonderful relationship is what this boy had for his mother. It is why i have read this story many times over and have shared with with my wife, who also loved it. Thanks for the memories.

Slim

a wonderfully artistically written story! truly a step above the majority of stories here. and a really hot, slow build up to a really sexy story! thanks for sharing!

omg

One of the best reads ever. Just the right pace and very tight. I was looking for a story just like this to read and I'm so delighted I found it. I wish they had six stars. Thanks

There are so many different things I want to say, but, I'll just say this. There has only been one story I've read here that causes so many emotions at once, Naked Beneath, by Lovecraft. Until this one. It is so well written, so focused on the emotional aspect of a relationship... I'm speechless. Another commenter said it, the rawness of this, it is overpowering. Simply an amazing read.

Extremely well written. Evokes the feeling of those fleeting moments that mark our ultimate experiences.

This is gorgeous writing.

Just splendid story telling. Love the style, just living in the moment, witnessing the ultimate sensual taboo between mother and son. I shall explore more of your writing with relish!

This is one of the best stories on this site.

A wonderful, romantic read with real characters and just the right mix of tongue-in-cheek humor, heart-pounding, taboo sex, and bittersweet reentry into reality. The flavor of the Outer Banks is real and spot on! Clearly a place the author knows well and loves.

Thanks for all your offerings on this site!

Encore, please!

Read and learn.

i have never found myself excited by love between a mother and her son - until now.

This story is nearly perfect. The steady, gradual building of passion hinted at in the first scene is exquisite. You portray an undeniable love and respect between Nora and her son, and the eroticism would make my underwear catch fire if i had any on.

Thank you, most graciously!

-a

Such a beautiful build up to the inevitable. Very well written and told.

This has to be one of the best stories I've read on this site. Thank you so much!

The best story I've ever read on literotica.

My mom had me by caesarian section, so I knew she has a tight pussy. She was horny often, I could hear her moaning at night as she masturbated, and lately, she's been saying my name. I went into her room when I heard her, and started stroking my hard cock for her to see. She looked at my cock, and spread her legs wide. I moved on top of her and pushed firmly inside her wet pussy in one thrust. I pounded my mom like there was no tomorrow until we came at nearly the same time. We ended up fucking three times that night, and then as soon as we woke up the next morning.

Why would you even ask? Yes I would indeed.

It would have been cool for them to promise each other to always find a place or a time to repeat their sexual adventure. I mean after she doesn't have sex with her husband. Why not make a secret pact with her son?

This is the perfect mother/son story for my tastes. The sex and the buildup to it are exceedingly well done, but what got to me most was the beautiful depth of their love. These are two very sincere and decent people whose emotions seem completely real. The mother is not a slut in any way, and the son does not try to make her become one. There can be no purer love than that between mother and son, and when it becomes physically passionate, it does not lose that purity if the two people are genuinely good people. This is exactly the kind of relationship that I would have adored with my own mother if things had worked out that way. I would think that they will be unable to remain sexually aloof for very long, although your handling of the ending is perfect in its originality and believability.

Beautifully written, with rare, spare economy and elegance. Good for you.

Thanks for being original...We have enough stories of mom's with 44DD breasts, and sons with 12" dicks...Erotica at its very best...!

Incredibly sensual, intellectually profound, emotionally touching. Thanks for this erotic masterwork. I hope you will continue this story or write another story soon. You have a unique talent around here.

A brilliant and well paced story, nice build up. I notice the 'probably will not happen again' but any chance of a sequel? Possibly with the husband staying with them in the cabin on the condition that this time he will be the one sleeping on the sofa?

holy, that is one of the best stories i've ever read. nice job.

Loved it - I will ALWAYS remember it.

amzing. Simply amazing!!!!! This story made me jack off every second while reading it.

Marvelous story! Erotic and emotional and tender! Marvelous!

One of the best stories I have ever read, fantastic! Really loved the way you build the enviroment, and the passion!

What else can I say. One of the best stories I've ever read in the last 14 years.

One of the best ever. From the beach to the toilet just incredible please more like this or continue this please.

one of the best storys in here – seriously.

It Can't Stop There.....it should not stop there.....regardless! Yes I would let it happen and would welcome it.

Not with my mother, but with the right mother if she was mine. I liked that he was not a teenager, but a mature man.

Good story my friend, some not so believable bits but over all good stuff. I enjoyed it and my orgasm.

An unbelievable yet very believable story, fantastic build up to the sad ending. I look forward to more of your stories.

I have enjoyed reading this story.

YES!!! I could let it happen.