All Comments on 'Naked Dancing with Lilly'

I really enjoyed reading this story. The dream was realistic and sensual. Will Jacques ever wake up and see that Lilly is the woman of his dreams? I wonder why she keeps waiting for him to make the first move?

I hope you write more stories. They have real plots and characters that are realistic.

Typical of teenaged uncertainty and frustration. Well done. Five stars.

Thank you or as I would say in my native French - Merci Bien!

The romantic relationship between Jaques and Lilly was included in my first story - Good Morning Wood. I suspect it will continue for sometime as neither is ready, willing or able to admit that they love each other.

I am thinking of writing this story of the day Jaques leaves for the States from Lilly’s point of view. Do you think that is a good idea?