Naked Girl on the Island

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Sure, you're going to say, you tell friends secrets you can't tell just anyone, tell those secrets to those you love. But what if a secret hurts so much you can't even tell it to yourself? You hide it away inside you, unable to tell anyone, where if you let it, it festers like a cancer and finally kills you. I knew Louise had boat-load of such painful secrets. Who in her situation wouldn't have? She would tell me when she could, and I would wait as long as she needed. Meanwhile, I had the best sex with her any guy ever fell into, equally good as with our nanny, Celeste, a wonderful external-to-sex friendship with them both, a great job that paid well doing work I loved, a nice-guy father-in-law with a wonderful yacht, mansion, a fast plane and a business where my off-duty technical expertise paid off in deep respect and appreciation. In general, I had the life any guy age 23 would pray to enjoy some day.

And Louise, Celeste, and my soon-to-appear son in my wife's belly? Yes, my single and absolutely alone vacation to Barely Island Bay that year promised to pay huge dividends—forever.

Louise summed it up better than I ever could. As we lay there together, both still in lover's slumber, she whispered, "Lance? If I never tell you this, you'll never know."

"What's that, Honey?"

"Back on that island and for all those days before and later, I felt so ruined I thought I'd never feel whole again. But thanks to you, now I do. I feel whole every way a woman can possibly feel whole. Thanks for being what I need most in the whole world."

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SatyrDickSatyrDick3 months ago

[08.02.24]

Fun and Sexcellente!

11/10!!!!!

Hey @brunnzl

Just because a writer writes a story where a woman 'goes Lesbian' it is NOT an indication that they are an 'incel' - it is a maybe not so common in this day and age occurence where a previous 'straight' married woman leaves her husband for another woman, three off the top of my head are Meredith Baxter who married 3 men then married a woman the 4th time in 2013, Anne Heche who was married 2x to men then almost married Ellen Degeneres - then was in a relationship with another man, and finally Wanda Sykes 1st married to a man then a woman.

And it goes without saying, it also goes the same way for men - of which Joel Grey is a good example.

So nothing about 'incelitis' here.

brunnzlbrunnzl10 months ago

when louise's mother "went lesbian" I had to stop. incel writing.

drseaknightdrseaknight11 months ago

You are a wonderful writer that sees into people and arranges clever narratives and intriguing characters with flaws and redeeming qualities. Thank you so much for your work.

Maximus53Maximus53over 1 year ago

Started good and could have been better if Louise wasn’t so mentally unstable and there wasn’t that weird arranged marriage thing.

It could have been so much better if he had helped her recover and grew to love each other over time instead of what it was.

I am guessing the author started to get bored with the story at the end and created that weird out of place vigilante story.

StanRamesStanRamesalmost 2 years ago

Started good. Second part, last couple of pages, nope. Bad.

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