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cmj711cmj71111 months ago

I enjoyed the way they used the kite to keep connected.

IJS0904IJS090411 months ago

A well written story with characters that felt real, with all their faults. Well done and thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story but ages of Camille and Tammy don’t match up with starting at Cal Poly

AileyInnAileyInn11 months ago

Great story. Every kite needs a string…

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

"Chaise longue" is the correct term. It's French. Means "long chair". Nothing to do with a lounge.

dmallorddmallord10 months ago

This was so damn good. Simple statements carried so much angst that I felt sorry for the three of them. It has all the elements of a good noir story - flawed characters trying to do good but certainly not succeeding very well or not at all, in the daughter's case in particular. Definitely a 5* story for content, structure, and tone.

oneyneedsmoreoneyneedsmore10 months ago

Took a turn I wasn't expecting

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I'm a soon-to-be-retired planning consultant living in the US southwest. For those wondering about my "Unlikely Angels" story, Thank you for reading, voting and commenting on the story. I'm glad that many of you enjoyed it, but I removed it from Literotica after I made the "b...