All Comments on 'Naked in School'

by Eros_343

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HidemeblogHidemeblogover 1 year ago

Great start! Can’t wait to follow this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It would help you had proof read you story before posting it. Needed to be more detailed, a bit more background would have helped.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineover 1 year ago

Very hot. Being a nudist, I had wished there were clothing optional schools, from grade school, on up through high school. Society is so prudish, hung up regarding casual nudity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start, they need to run into his sister in school and she can help her brother and his partner.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

Since this submitter obviously holds everyone who was unfortunate enough to read this in such low regard (they didn't even take a second to review what they vomited out to catch errors that a second grader would catch), I'm not going to hold back.

This is garbage. Go find an imagination. Go find an education, then learn how to write and how to use English.

In the meantime, quit wasting this site's resources and our time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree, you need a proofreader. But I will watch for more chapters too. I liked the original stories in this genre.

DamianthesilverwolfDamianthesilverwolfover 1 year ago

Liked the start needs a bit of work on buildup but overall can’t wait to see more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

more please

photokenphotokenover 1 year ago

great start!!!

please keep going

NudistDavidNudistDavidover 1 year ago

Great story!! I went to the wrong college .... Ha

jane marwoodjane marwoodabout 1 year ago

Short, but very sweet. 5*****

wwaldripwwaldrip12 months ago

Great story, interesting concept, would love a school like that

Frisky60Frisky6012 months ago

Great fantasy that probably all of us have had in some form or another - being naked in front of others and not being able to do anything about it. I wonder if there are any scientific studies on this common phenomenon. My only complaint is that the author should better proofread his otherwise excellent composition for grammatical and spelling errors. There were lots of them!

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie12 months ago

I wish I’d been given this opportunity at school, I would have been wanking all over school

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago
Proof read PLEASE

Please take the time to print out a hard copy and read it aloud to hear the mistakes. There were more than a half dozen in the first screen worth. It's a good story, but don't rush getting it out with so many errors.

CcatoneCcatone11 months ago

Can't help but love a fantasy like that 😍🎇

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I can not believe his sister sucked him off; and swallowed his cum!!

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