All Comments on 'Naked Oil Wrestling'

by FerdGerfel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Naked oil wrestling

Good enough, as the story goes.

It would help to reorganize the series so they're in one group.

Pictures would be wonderful, even the poor dumb bastard who what's the ugly one. Should have given him both and told him he couldn't handle one of them!

Maybe we have an artist following along that can offer about a dozen sketches for each story?

Good luck!

FerdGerfelFerdGerfelover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Unfortunately it's up to the site to organize the stories. Since I didn't give them all one title and make them chapters they're all organized alphabetically, hence me telling readers in the beginning the order they should follow.

I'm a lousy artist. If there is an artist out there who would like to illustrate my writings, go for it!

GoodhueGoodhueabout 8 years ago
Un-cool For Kid!

The emotional connections between the 3 characters are somewhat difficult to figure out. Is it Fred or Alice that Nicole likes more?

Fred's kid should not be exposed to the threesome arrangement in Nicole's new sex pad. Have to figure her mom will put the kibash on that!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hot story

This story was very cute and irritating. I accompanied my dad with Alice and Nicole in my sex drive and played my hand on my pen. I met the beauty of the story. Tnx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My fantasy

This story is just fantastic. I literally never thought I would read something so close to my ultimate fantasy. Just incredible thank you for the work you have shared with us

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